Love it... you need to make a sequel to it!

Yhhhhghhg

more storys like this but more detail ni the next have ally ask austin to fuck her 4 of 5 times or get austin ask ally what want him to do to her

This story is great but this writer doesn't know anything about pregnancy. Ally's carrying twins, large clothes aren't able to hide her bump! This is so unrealistic...

Scratch that. It's been TWO YEARS. WHY THE FRIG DID YOU STOP? Gah!

VALENTINES DAY!? What the hell. That was like three months ago! Write some more, it's a fantastic story.

Update!" Please

I can't read on. I stopped at Chapter 6. This is just another cliche pregnancy story where Ally acts incredibly selfish and rings away from everything. Why can't anyone make a story where she isn't such a selfish coward!

Scarlett

Austin's mom is perverted and deeply troubled if she is that excited talking about her son's sex life and dick. Seriously, gross!

Scarlett

I dont know if I red this fanfic before but it was AMAZING! I loved the smutty scenes but the storyline was great to. Keep writing because you are an amazing writer:)

PLZZZ UPDATE

This is so beautiful, I can't wait for the next chapter!

PLZZ UPDATE

Love it!

I think that the way you're showing Ally as a mom is spot on. I feel like some people make her a teen mom but they don't really capture the mom part. You are really making the mom part stand out but at the same time you're not making it too over done. It's like small things put in. I also love how you have Ally saying mommy and daddy but at the same time, just mommy. I feel like she would be doing this because she's not used to having another parent around. It has always been just her. I was wondering when you were going to incorporate the song. I had thought you'd make Austin sing it to the kids and they'd recognize it, but this way was way more perfect. I love that you had her sing and then him join in. It was nice to have a chapter devoted to just them talking it out. So many people rush these kinds of things but you stuck with it and made it important. I especially love how you ended the chapter with, it was worth it. That just adds a light touch of humor to it and made it perfect. And now for the freak out YOU auSED MY QUOTE! You have no idea how happy that made me. Just to know that someone else likes it made me feels good. I really hadn't even tried to come up with it, it just happened. I was talking to this girl and she was complaining about her family (she has a pretty sucky life, her moms a drug addict, her dad's an ass, etc). Her sister and her were fighting about giving up on their mom because she's also has schizophrenia, so I just ended up saying that. But it made me so happy when I saw that you used it. I can't wait for the update to see how Trish scolds Ally and Austin. And I can't wait for Austin to meet Ally's guy friend.