Yeesh...that was awkward like awkward, he did the right thing but it wasn't a good choice. I mean I'm like thinking what's gonna happen if those appear together during a mission. It would be awkward, and then Reed would find out and then everyone find out, Susan might be ok since she's a woman no offense and Spidey a male so everyone would think Spidey force her to do it. Next thing you know is Marvel universe, mostly Reed kills Spidey

when Susan say she fat and ugly I hat to stop reading for a moment a think logicallySusan, Invincible Girl, the blonde beauty in blue Spandex which has an amazing figure that can put most woman in shame thinks she's fat and ugly...?'

Make peter go out with felicia

kool

OH MAN THIS STINKS SUE IS SOO HOT AND SEXY. AND SPIDER-DUDE IS SOO AWSOME

briliant! i love it!

This is an interesting fic, though there are a few errors. For example Pete slapped MJ, by accident. He was on a rant, I believe and turn around waving his arms, she was stood right behind him. But I agree MJ and Pete are a mistake. Sue was OOC but despite the above I enjoyed this fic. Artistic Licence, right? Does that apply with fanfics? I think it should if it doesn't. Especially liked the: "Well at least I've still got my health" bit, brillaint.

Keep on rocking,

Coops

one word: good

You can almost feel the drama in this story. But why wouldn't you have Peter say that he actually loved Sue? I mean, that would have been in line with his character of helping, right?
It's amazing how much three little words can make such a difference.

I liked this story. Part of me actually wanted Peter to give in, but the better part of me agreed with the outcome and I think it's a perfect match on Peter's character. Keep up the good work.

Angst always has its place, and I think it was warranted here.

One of the greatest things about Spider Man is that he always tries to strive to his ideal. He sticks with his morals no matter what. And while that sounds corny, it makes him one of the most believable super-heroes out there. Even though being Spider-Man has ruined his marriage, his life, his family, he's still out there every day saving people, and that makes him a true hero.

Now that I've said my piece, about your story. Know that you inspired me to that nice big block of text up above. And it's not OOC, because you showed Peter as he really is. Fantastic work on this story. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Brian, after reading the other reviews I felt that I had to add my two cents worth. I feel that your portrayal of Peter Parker is dead on and I can tell that you read the comic book. Of course, we don't know if the Parkers will divorce or not, as I write this, but it certainly is a possibility. I don't know enough about the FF to say whether Sue Storm would behave in this manner. Why would she suddenly decide that she loves Peter? The FF don't really know his identity although it would make more sense to me if they did, especially since the Torch and Spidey have been friends for years.

Keep up the good work. I will try to read your other stories too.

This does flex it claws at me, almost contentedly. It reminds me of the rain, the beaches. *smiles, remembering.*

Very nice. I was really feeling sorry for peter, please continue.

*Sigh* This story mananged to thuroughly depress me. Now im not sure if the whole hitting Mj when she was pregnant thing is comically acurate or anything considering i've only picked up the series about issue 30...but dang! That was so sad! Seriously!

Do you have some grudge against the couple or something? Sorry for the kind of mean review but i kind of feel like it had to be said. If there is another chapter to come with this fic, I hope you make it a little bit...chipper?

I guess, i'll read the next chapter just to see how you develop this.

-(a kind of depressed and upset) LAXgirl

p.s. please hurry with another chapter for your lone hero fic though. That one really rocks!