| Reviews for Nothing Can Save Me |
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  DEMON chapter 8 . 4/27/2015 guest What's your problem? This is a FAN fiction sight, anyone can write here, and this story is better than a lot of stuff out there. It may be confusing, but calling it crap is a bit much. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2015 The last time you updated was a year and a half ago. I don't care if it's old. And I hate the reviews you are getting compliment you. Your writing is crap. This is not an insult but a critique. Hopefully within this past year or so you have improved but I wouldn't know so I will tellyou what I do know about his story. It's inconsistent. Don't ever change the names from narration to speech. It doesn't help the reader no matter what you want don't ever do that. Another thin you put them in a school and treat them as if they were human then you later say Germany and Prussia are countries. You don't explain anything about the setting. That leaves readers confused. Your spelling and grammar are fine but you need structure. Workon that for future works. Not just on this site but in life as well. I am sorry to call this crap but it literally hurt to read it. I cringed. I seriously cringed. Do not say this is because of your age. Unless you are ten years old or younger this is not acceptable work for anyone above elementary school. Again I am sorry that this sounds like an insult but it is the truth. |
 Kornblume Cavalier chapter 8 . 12/9/2013 Its really good! I hope you'll be able to update soon! I read the first chapt and couldn't stop frm then on! Gd job! |
| SilhouetteSeeker chapter 5 . 11/22/2013 Pardon me, I am going to be snippy for a minute: I am NOT going to lie to you when I say this. You are an incredibly unreliable author. If your going to be late updating just be...late. Seriously, there are 8 chapters and 2 are short little authors notes. It's highly annoying especially because the chapters that are in fact actually chapters are so short. Stop it. Happy note now: I do like this story and it is written very well. The plot seems good so far. :) Silhouette |
| A Fan chapter 7 . 11/15/2013 Its been so long since the last update. I really miss this fanfic. Its one of my favorites to tell the truth. |
| fictionmeister chapter 7 . 8/10/2013 Heyyy, late review! Cute chapter, can't wait to see where the plot is going! It must be good if you're on fire :) HAVE FUN AT DAYCON |
| Scones Of Rage chapter 5 . 7/12/2013 Aw! The ending to this chapter just made my heart flutter. Please continue! I must know what happens next! |
| fictionmeister chapter 5 . 6/17/2013 Awwww, Bruderly moment! hopefully things will turn out for the best! |
| Heidancho chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 Poor Gil, it made me so sad ewww Thanks for the update, still looking forward to the next chapter :] |
| SunshineProject chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 pure, pure beauty *sniff* love this |
| hiimiko chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 YAY GERMANCEST! :DDD I couldn't be any happier! Awesome story! The second and third chapter made meh feels overflow! Poor Gil! QAQ The last part in Chapter 3 made me happier though... Please update soon! And I hope that you can make your chapters longer though, but it's ok if you keep it at this length. -TheLemonGoddess |
| SunshineProject chapter 2 . 5/25/2013 Q.Q i beg, please update |
| xXSarcasticAngelXx chapter 1 . 5/19/2013 please update please |
| xXSarcasticAngelXx chapter 2 . 5/19/2013 aw so sad |
| Heidancho chapter 2 . 5/18/2013 Wow it's a really good beginning, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! () |
