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A very good and funny story! Everybody was in Charater and the parody was well done. The final fight was both awesome and hilarious. Great Job!

That. Was. so. funny!

That was an awesome read! You really did do a great job recreating the show, and it was terribly amusing And I adored the little crossover bit at the end, being a Ranma fan myself, that was quite rich x3 Looking forward to more!

HOW DARE YOU I'LL TRANFORM INTO SAILOR V AND KICK YOUR ASS DON'T YOU DARE TAKE THE MIC OUT OF SAILOR MOON.

i am just laughing right now. sailor moon and dexter lab? omg i worship you!this is good

Wonderful! You kept them perfectly in character! That was hilarious! Sounds exactly like something that would happen in the show. Off to reead the next chapter!

Oh my GOd. I was laughing so hard. I've never read anything like this before. Not only was the essence of the original Dexter's Lab captured, but there were lines that made me laugh very hard. (like that blender comment from Mandark...)

Great job here!

Very nice, and in the spirit of the cartoons. Good work!

interesting to say the least

Wow. You've managed to perfectly capture the spirit of the original Dexter's Laboratory, right down to the dialogue. That's the most important aspect of writing fanfiction, in my opinion. Now if only the newer episodes were like this.
I'm not a huge fan of Sailor Moon, but it WAS the first anime that I ever saw and I like seeing it parodied. This was an awesome parody, and I loved the bits about the corny music. I couldn't find any glaring errors, either.
And the outtake at the end? That's a really scary combination.

That was excellent. I know close to nothing about Sailor Moon and I enjoyed that. Keep up the good work. If you want you can review my Dexter Fanfic.

LOL poor Dex, can's be easy to have DeeDee as a sister. ; Hope u wright some more, cas' u good at it! And I can totally see this as an episod. ~.