How mysterious, the unreality of the dream-illusion world and the confusion as to how it could be real... Nice and metaphysical!

JK

Interesting chapter. I am not really sure what to make of it. It is very mysterious. Can't wait till next chapter.

DragonSlayer2187

This is very well written and mysterious. I can't believe nobody has found this place that has water and storms. I hope you get the next chapter posted soon. I want to know what this place is and if Vash and Knives survive.

DragonSlayer2187

I love your descriptions. I can feel the heat of the desert.

Did he just fall into an aquifer of water or is this some kind of dream? Also, I was wondering, can Vash swim? How does the water feel in comparison to the hot desert? (or is this a non-question ‘cause it is a dream and I’ll find out if I have patience and read the next entry? ...I am so bad at patience! )

I enjoyed this. thanks for sharing.
JK