Lol I bet you did

Lollll genius! Very sly Hahahaha! My god how do you come up with this hilarious and exciting stuff you're amazing! Haha anyway thanks again for sharing this awesome fic

I love it! Fang's offer to show Lightning the Pulsian alphabet made me laugh out loud and I almost spit out my coffee! The ending was worth it. Going down under... *snickers* ;)

This was very funny and cute, awesome job!

wow. Me and my nerd friends would really enjoy those pickup lines. I gotta say though, they're kind of useless without having played the game. Good story.

This was definitely a good read :) I enjoyed it thoroughly

haha love this idea...why didn't i think of it first! :P

'Maybe you could show me the Cocoon alphabet.' Fang continued.

'But you already know the Cocoon alphabet.'

Oh Light :') Bless her so much.
Haha you are the master of FFXIII pick-up lines. This deserves more reviews, hilarious! And I also thought the paradigm names were a bit weird but never like this heh, but it works! Awesome idea x)

Haha, nice one! I liked that, thanks for sharing what you couldn't get out of your head ;)
And how I loved that moment when Vanille was listening and knew everything and Lightning just didn't get it.

AHAHA nice oneshot! Leave it to Lightning not to get it immediately and I just learned a new pickup line xD

Hehe good oneshot! I enjoyed it :-)