When will u update?

This is an amazing fic! I love how you keep Doffy and Law in character so perfectly! I’m also loving how much of a spitfire Velica is- she is perfect for Doffy as she totally keeps him in line :D
I hope that we will get to read more of this amazing story soon! I binged it all in one day lol :D
(PS- I’m totally Team Doffy/Velica. What can I say- I’m partial to the crazy guys lol)

I finally got caught up! Are you going to update anytime soon?

Oof, how fucking interesting. Although I haven't reviewed for quite a few chapter's but... I very much enjoyed this and hope that you'd update soon.

Ok I know this has nothing to do with the actual story but... What the fuck. Why on earth would a person want you to slow down with the updates? Are they a dumbass? The fuck is wrong with them. They should be happy with the fact that you even update. Damn ungrateful shits these days.

Oh? She can transport herself to different locations now?

Aw! A Cliffhanger! I'm supporting this Fanfic!

I'm really enjoying your story and your OC is very intriguing and unique! Keep up the amazing work! :)

i really enjoyed reading your story
your oc is really well written, i really love the fact that she's not overpowerful because often Oc's turn into god like beings and it often ruins the story. But here it's not the case. So thank you for writing this really great story an i hope you will not stop writing it. i hope you will update soon!

I've been enjoying this immensely. It's an interesting take on the whole shebang and I look forward to your next update :)
Your OC is interesting and the time manipulation is good. I'm glad you made it so she had limits to her powers so she didn't seem too overpowered but i'm curious as to why the sea prism stone effects her like that, did you have a reason or just did it to make things interesting? (sorry if i'm being a bother, I love knowing more about people's OCs :P )

Amazing! I have no words! Girl, you are good at writing and your OC seems quite interesting! You cannot leave this abandoned, please, please, please, update soon!

Please update! I love this story

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Hi there, :D
I read your story since yesterday and I was so focused that I couldnt stop reading!
I really liked your idea of the OC being somone important to Donflamingo and her slowly going independent.
At almost every end of a chapter I was feeling cliffhanged and wanted to read on.
But what confused me a bit was that Velicias hair colour was suddenly different (At the beginning blonde and to the end dark).
I look really forward to the end of the story and have high hopes for you because you made a simple OC give off the feeling as if she could really be in the anime and you gave her character.
I like that!
But I must say it would be awsome if you could do a ff about the OC x Donflamingo, since it seems to go into the OC x Law direction. I also like Law but Im a big Mingo fan.
But then he would have to kill of his prostitutes xD (I hate them...)
This is all just my own opinion so please keep on writing how you want and like it because the writer should enjoy writing storys and I think and honestly hope you are. :)

So thank you for the great story and Im looking forward to the rest.