| Reviews for Madness at the Gate |
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   WithinTheMadness chapter 1 . 6/19 Nope nope and hell no. I'm still praying you were a teenager when you wrote this. I've never been more insulted by a FanFiction before in my 3 years of reading it. It's a military base, underground. EVERYONE would've been snatching his goddamn, needless cigarettes from his face. Fucking hell the senseless inclusion of them for... what? What purpose? To piss everyone off? It's working. And would've seen him thrown out of the base regardless of his importance due to the health risk alone. Even in the 90s. You can fuck with HP, but Stargate is where I draw the line. To hell with this story. |
| deckman1234 chapter 34 . 6/16 I think I started reading this when you first wrote it and was very happy. Then because I was new the I did not know how to follow/favorite or so I think. I recently rediscovered this while looking through another authors favorite stories. I have very much enjoyed this and now I am looking forward to the 3rd installment. Cheers:) |
| Erebus D Thanatos chapter 1 . 5/4 re-reading this, because it is an amazing series. |
| Nonyaarb chapter 33 . 2/23 Holy shit. The story progression is top notch |
| KMF-G chapter 19 . 2/23 Stop kicking O'Neill, he is already almost underground. You can insert yourself in, but why shit on him constantly? Like SG-1 commander is responsible for ship security, face-palm... So the genius made multi-megaton starship which is bigger than anything US(at this point only US is building that, SINGLE Ship) did produced in all SG series combined... But it has 30 missile tubes LOL SERIOUSLY... In addition to 50ACs/per side(how many sides? 2 or 4, or 6?)and 48RGs. Now spread 178(?)guns/missile tubes over ship 1000M long, 400f-900bM wide and 325f-650bM tall and it carries 30 FIGHTERS ROFL When you copy Star Destroyer and make it shorter by cutting front off... And of course it is stronger than even Asgard Warships, to be precise it is worth of 4 Asgard Warships... But of course you make "plasma sniper rifle" powered by liquid naquada instead of keron blocks xD and blow 4 Hataks for no fk reason... |
| KMF-G chapter 13 . 2/23 What a retarded action... Blowing 4 perfectly fine Hataks after he even spent time and effort to "clean" them out. |
| Nonyaarb chapter 7 . 2/22 Jenehehehehehehehehehe |
| MadManWithAHat chapter 5 . 2/8 Is the personality based off HK-47? |
| Steve chapter 23 . 1/30 And Harry proves that he's too, at heart, a leming. |
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/8 Love it |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/7 Lolololololllo |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 33 . 1/3 Absolutely loved the first story and this story, maybe a rushed ending, but still enjoyable nonetheless. |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 32 . 1/3 I love their relationship |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 28 . 1/3 Lol |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 27 . 1/3 Oh no |
