Omygop at first I thought Edd was writing it for his diary.

;(

I really want to know what Edd did to Kevin for him to be so shy when Rolf opened the door :o

The ending was pretty sad, honestly. Don't you think Kevin would mind or that Edd would've minded more? When did he get over him so easily?

I think it ended perfectly :)
I finished this whole thing in 2 days just because it was so good

Have to admit I would love a sequel that goes in depth with edd's parents and why they are always gone and the emotional effects that it has had on him.

So cute I love it

I loved it I read it all in a few hours. But i wasbthrilled about the ending :'( overall it was an awesome read!

thiS was beautiful,,

I ALMOST CRIED
DAMN YOU FU CKIN
I CANT
WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS CHAPTER
I CAME FOR THE SMUT
BUT I ENDED UP REALLY INTO THE PLOT AND THE STORY LINE
AND THEN THIS
WYD IM SCREAMIGN

I just wanted to ask, why didn't they stay together? Like, he thought it'd be best to move on? Idk why.. He'll probably never find a guy as good as Kevin... Hopefully, I will get my answer. It was just so out of the blue.

One of the best smut scenes yet! It's cute, how Edd gets all 'DOM' on Kevin and then apologizes right after, and how jealous and angry he was when Ariel entered the picture.

RolfXEd... nice implications. I am infatuated with this story and I have just began reading it this morning. Wow, this is such an emotional story and I cried tears if sadness when Kevin and Edd had that fight. Dear lord I felt so broken inside and was just bawling silently as I read. Thank you for this amazing fanfic I love you... (few dork moments in there... I loved all of it.)

First off, I just want to say... absolutely incredible job writing this fic. I'm new to Kevedd (but completely infatuated with it) and this is a beautiful start to my new obsession. So thank you.

I would like to point out some things that I think you did lovely on, and some things that could be improved.

-Wonderful character development, and I enjoyed very much how you stayed in character. Every single character acted just like they would've in the show, and the dialog and actions fit wonderfully. My favorites were Double D, Rolf, Eddy and Kevin. You made these characters so interesting and correct in every way.
-Loved the transition and action. While I was reading this, I was never bored. Every action part of the story kept me on the edge of my seat, anticipating to know what was going to happen. And the story wasn't in choppy bits, and it was easy to follow.
-Probably my favorite part of the whole thing... the smut. The first time it was introduced with just the dialog, I was expecting a bit more. However, you picked it up at a great amount when you began to add details. I almost couldn't comprehend how amazing it was.
-I incredibly enjoyed the interactions and relationships between characters. Especially the one scene with Ed and Rolf at Riverside. I was actually beginning to ship the two XD. From the way you kept the friction between Kevin and Eddy's relationship and the bittersweet romance between Edd and Kevin was breathtaking.

-Throughout the story I had slight trouble keeping track of who was speaking when, so perhaps try to work on that.

Some of my favorite moments in the story was, when Kevin and Edd kissed on the dare at the first party, the laxative prank, everything that went down at Riverside, the scary fight in the locker room when one kid pulled out a knife (I screamed), and all the adorable fluff Kevedd moments.

Once again I want to thank you so much for creating this wonderful story for everyone to enjoy.

Omg this fic made me cry, and laugh, and it is just generally one of the best fics I've ever read. Thank you for writing this, it will forever hold a place in my heart

OMG I CRIED