Not bad. actually, scratch that, I'm interested.

Chapters are still kinda rough in places. Typos and stuff. But the story remains entertaining. Finally got the reunion with Kim and Ron too. That was nice. Hopefully more chapters will come sooner than later. Keep it up.

OKAY- INTERESTING. Is Ron going to have been ascended due to the monkeypaw/fist thing that he mastered? Is Ron masquerading as Caelus this time around- or is there something else in the works where he comes back? Because honestly, it's just WRONG that he's died.

Convergence, on a whim/wing-and-a-prayer, should be quite the event.

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Yeah, sometimes hard copies save the day...

Oh boy, things just got worse.

And Caelus...hmmm, wonder who that is...or was.

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Sounds like each team will get along famously...Nah..for now.

But I'm with Cam, for some reason his Team is a trouble magnet.

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I look forward to see how you do the second story in the arc, I'm sure it'll be great.

The years haven't been too kind to Kim, but she's made it this far ok. Interesting about Tara and Bonnie and their career choices...and involvement in that project by Wade and Tara.

Something's brewing far away and a familiar name just popped up. Wonder about this team.

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Interesting that this one's being left an orphan. But if you've got ideas, run with them.

And now we'll see where you take us.

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