Shouldn't Naruto be more angry at her for blatantly invading his privacy like that? I know I would be pissed off.

hell yes

Wow just wow, your story has left me speechless. The story was amazing. I rarely got bored. I just wish you could have finished it.

What I'm reading from this as of this chapter, is that the only way Naruto would stand a chance against Cthulhu, is for him to become the Sage of Six Paths, and do to Cthulhu what Hagoromo did to Shinju.

For now, I'll keep reading. This fic is quite entertaining so far. I do hope it stays that way.

This was my most biggest piece of crap I ever met in my life.

What happened to Hastur?

who the fuck is sauske?

Tigers are not stealthy for human looking for them they are only stealthy to their prey as most of them can see onrange to them a tiger is moving shadows or foliage

You're writing with dyslexia?! Damn! *que impressed clap*

This is perhaps the greatest thing I ever read on this website.

please redo some of the earlier chapters, spelling and grammar are atrocious.

LOL sounds like whoever wrote that passage lived next door to a poor musician, "maddening beating of drums, and monotone pipings of unseen flutes". I can picture many sleepless nights rolling around with a pillow pressed down over their head. xD

that shit was creepy and funny as hell.

Love Bs raping. It ain't bad at all.

Why does everyone have dyslexia here lmao. But good job nontheless, thumbs up!