| Reviews for The Furthest Planet From The Sun |
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Xo56oX chapter 2 . 7/26 I really love your Ulquihime writing so much! I was just wondering what happened to your other fic? Are you transitioning them to another site? I really hope you are still writing as you are supremely talented |
Yoo chapter 25 . 7/20 The smut is so hot, best I've ever read tbh. One reviewer said that there's too much dialog and the smut is too often but I disagree. I love how there's so much to read and how in depth the interactions between each character is. The pacing is very natural and the smut is top notch. Seriously think about getting a patreon, people will pay top dollar for this shit, me included |
lirael C chapter 25 . 7/14 I want you to know that I sign up the account just for this! and already fav and follow both account and this epic story of yours. OMG you have no idea how much I'm in love with your story. So far I read a massive amount for UlquiHime fanfiction and I can tell yours is THE BEST of all. BTW I was a guest named "lirael" below, but the name has already taken. Still hope you update the story. I love that your Ulqiorra is still very calm, observant, and done no real physical harassment to his "women" (when he's gonna call her by name anyway, just once!) |
lirael chapter 22 . 6/22 Hello again, I just want to say that your story is incredible. The way you portrayed all the characters from the book is just so perfect and the character development extra from the book is way better than the manga itself. Orihime grew up, Ulquiorra started having some feelings little by little and all those contradictions inside him also very well-plotted. Even Nnoitra is strangely charming to me in this fiction. But not Grimmjow... after this chapter. The only thing is sometimes the narration of the character between the conversation is a bit too long. I read and already forgot what they're talking about and I needed to scroll the page up to look for it not just shift my eyes a little to find it nearly above or sth. And I understand the fact that you posted this fiction chapter by chapter. but for me who continuously read all chapters together. The sex scenes came up is a bit too often somehow. So it wasn't very smooth. But that's it. I think maybe it just a minor thing since I can stop reading for a while as well. The last thing... Pleaseeee continue writing it. I happened to see the comment below me that said she would pay for you to write. Well.. me too! If you do a handmade A5 book or publish it on your own, I'd like to keep it. Even PDF version as well. OR if you started your own novels, I'll support and follow. Just let me know... |
VeraVera chapter 24 . 6/19 Okay so if you dont finish this I won’t even cry (that much). What I really want is to see 2 things desperately. 1) Ulquiorra calls her by her name! And not woman. 2) she tells him she loves him. That’s all I can rest easy then :) those would be extremely hard to write but the way you write is.. phenomenal. I miss this story. I want to erase my memory and start again from the beginning! It was a gem every step of the way.. just too good. You are the masterpiece writer of fanfic, of bleach. |
Hot Damn chapter 16 . 6/18 With your writing skills, you could make some serious bank, just sayin'. |
VeraVera chapter 25 . 6/12 Okay sooo first things first. The story is phenomenal. I don’t know how else to explain what a masterpiece this story really is. Now I’m sure you have your reasons for not posting the rest of the chapters but when I tell you I will die without them I am not joking. This story had me actually feel sooo much. Like my stomach twisted and knotted and I could feel their emotions. The way you write is nothing short of beautiful. You have great character development for Ulquoirra - writing someone as stoic as him is next to impossible but no one could do it better than you. I read everything so quick I couldn’t even leave reviews for each chapter but I will go back and review I promise! This is by far my favourite clean fic if not favourite fic all together. I really hope you do continue this as there will be a forever void in my chest if I am to not know the ending. You did this pairing justice- everything is perfect and your writing girl, is amazing. I can’t even tell you how much I loved this and how well everything was, the gorge scenes the sexual ones. All of it cake together so well nothing was forced or out of place. I know it’s been 4 years since you updated and I’m not sure if you will ever get back to this but you are an amazing writer. I don’t know where you are now or what you’re doing but please don’t stop writing because your talent is so very pure. I am so happy to have read this, thank you for this gift and I hope you are keeping well and safe. |
Krystal bastic chapter 1 . 5/28 I will pay you to find out how this ends. Im so serious. It's been a long ass time since have I read this. I have reread this particular fan fiction 5 times now. I have read A LOT of fan fiction. This one still is my favorite. Please for the love of all that is holy tell me how you wanted to end it! ); |
lirael chapter 7 . 5/26 Hi, I know I'm a bit late to read this fanfic. I am in a quarantine period so I have time to digged up my old manga and re-read it. As I picked bleach, which I stopped long ago (more than 10 I believe) cause one of my friends spoiled me that Ulquiorra died, I found myself cannot reach to the death scene of him again for the second time and searching for fanfic to read instead. And yours is the best one so far that I read! Is was sooooo good that you still keep the character of everyone in the manga. Most fanfic changed Orihime to be an annoying girl or Ulquiorra to be entirely emotional. I know you finished the story already, but please keep up writing. |
edlaska chapter 25 . 5/25 Please keep going It's really the best Ulquihime Fanfiction I've ever read Thank you for that |
Guest chapter 25 . 5/5 Hello! I've read this story so many times that I lost count. My opinion about your work hasn't changed much. I still believe it one of the best, if not the best, depictions of relationship between Orihime and Ulquiorra, especially its complexity. I was, and still am, so impressed by it. Of course, as any reader here, I wish the story got the ending but I'm aware that sometimes we should take time :) I wish you patience and luck with it! However, I primary wanted to ask you about your two other stories of this ship - two oneshots which where on your account before this story. Has something happened to them? Obviously, you won't be able to reply to my review/message directly, however maybe there's a chance for some info? Hopefully, I'm not the only one who noticed... |
Yanbanana chapter 24 . 5/4 *** Posted too soon sorry. Anyway, the other ulquihime fics were sooo good, if they're gone for good then I'm really gonna miss them! I always found myself coming back to your ulquihime stories, no matter how many times I've re-read them, I never get tired of it haha. They're so immersive that I find myself in a relaxing mental escape where I'm right there with the characters, instead of just reading. Also, I have yet to read a better portrayal of Ulquiorra anywhere. Or Orihime. Or even Grimmjow, the way you write everyone is so true to their character it actually feels like it could be canon! Anyway, I hope you are doing well! And I'll always hope for your return! . |
Yanbanana chapter 25 . 5/4 So I noticed some of your stories are gone, your other ulquihime fics that I absolutely adore.. Especially The Number 4, with little Sora. Is everything ok? Are you ever gonna put them back up? Are you just editing them? or perhaps combining them into this story? Sorry, I'm a little worried that I may never get to read them again. |
AniStar13 chapter 25 . 4/26 Omg your writing is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. This was one of the realest portrayals of Ulquihime I've been digging around for. And your portrayls of the other characters are fun to follow. I also like Orihimes friendship with Wonderwise. Like a big sister. Definitly going to re read. Hope u write again. If not, wonderful work! |
Stay Safe chapter 25 . 3/24 I hope you are doing well! Stay safe! :) |