| Reviews for A Broken World |
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   6Jake1man6 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014 Well buddy, Now I have to offer to proofread for YOU! Your writing is passive and you used descriptions in the middle of sentences. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2014 Great story so far. I'm interested to see what Hades is all about. Rebirth of Chakra? Keep it up! |
| Fher34 chapter 2 . 2/5/2014 I'm crying like a baby. Neji... TenTen... NOOOO! Dx *sniff. U had the feeling that was going to happen. Damn kabuto and orochimaru. I'm sorry to hear that about your life :( |
| ViolatedMonkey chapter 5 . 2/3/2014 Damn man and dont take this as a bad thing but as something good. You are evil in this chapter. You know you have a good aithor when they can make you feel the emotion in the story. And i felt that emotion when ten ten and neji died. And to top it all of you had the little girl ask where her parents where. I almost shed a tear. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/30/2014 I REALLY LOVE THE STORY AND CAN4T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE IT ONE OF THE BEST I4VE READ IN A LONG TIME FOR THAT THANK YOU. |
| Fher34 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013 Haha i forgot to tell u in my last review that I want to give a shout out to ur story in my new published chapters this weekend. Can I? |
| Fher34 chapter 5 . 9/26/2013 Hey! I'm sowwy but I had no time to reply. However send me it story n I can have it betad by Saturday! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2013 I really like this story. I really hope, though, that the women (hinata, sakura, etc) Don't only become damsels in distress/only watch the kids, and actually become useful to their survival. Other than that, awesome job! Can't wait for more. |
| nhalltheway chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 You're story is very interesting! Glad that I tried reading. You deserve more reviews than you get. Looking forward to the next one. Thanks :)) |
| laurah2493 chapter 4 . 8/20/2013 oooo more please so good |
| Fher34 chapter 4 . 6/27/2013 It's cruel to leave us readers with unanswered questions! . awesome chapter anyway and I see that things are starting to go off into the plot, yes? XD |
| Sunny Sonic chapter 4 . 6/27/2013 I loved the action the beggining and am hoping I can see more of that. I feel as if naruto mutation may have been introduced early in the story, and seal just made it all the more confusing and unrealistic. That's just what I think though. |
| Cali3Brd chapter 3 . 6/6/2013 A very cute chapter I love the characters interactions and the sweet flashbacks haha compared to the last chapter which was a little more grim. But saying that I was waiting for something bad to happen! It was just too good to be true. Really enjoyed it! |
| Fher34 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013 Dang, this story is so good :O I can't believe it doesn't have many reviews! This thing is epic! |
| Sunny Sonic chapter 3 . 6/6/2013 I thought you did this chapter really well with the family moments and lemony stuff. I also liked that flashback and think it would be really cool if you do more like them. Keep up all the good work. |
