Wow i figured to finish it

Ok, now im not so sure i want to continue

Im not sure how to feel about this twist.

How did i know that idiot was going to do something

Im going to go out on a limb here since im pretty sure it hasnt been said yet, i think.

She is going to die at some point, probably from an enemy but Im pretty sure she is going to become a vampire one way or another. If you just kill her i wont be too happy

I didnt think i would get this far but im still here. I like it so far

Im a tad worried about that soldiers life

Ok, i will probably get through this fully since i got to chapter 4. However, Im not sure that I like that he went from human to mate so quickly, however, that isnt a complaint. Your writing is very well done which is probably the only reason I am still reading it. I dont know if i will finish it yet but im going to try too.

One more thing, Im guessing the dog doesnt like Walter because of what he does in the end of OVA/manga.

Heh heh...enthusiastic walks...RIP

That's too funny! "what did that hot Doctor say". I love it!

Damn that was a smooth at proposal.

I cannot begin to describe how much I love this story! You make the OC so relatable and yet awesome! Keep writing! Never lose sight of your dreams! GO people who made FANFICTION a reality! (And the even cooler people like you who use it!)

I loved the story, adding to favourites and will most definitely read part two :D

Okay, so I just want to say that I am LOVING this story so far. Holy shit the interactions between Ari and Ryan are freaking hilarious! XD

this was a really good story i love it

Please beta or proof read your work.