hope you finish this :)

Do you have plans to update?

Nice idea, I totally agree with your comment about Riley. But sad not updarted since.

Love the story! Hope you come back some day and finish it!

Are there going to be more chapters to follow?

Will you be continuing this story line? I noticed that you haven't since 2013. Its really very good; I love it. I loved that you brought out HOW Niomi and Seven became closer; I always was a little miffed that they never explained how Niomi went from this scared little girl to one who would play kadiscat with Seven (of all people to play games with).

I really like this story! I hope you will be able to come back to it soon!

Please please continue this story. It is very very good.

I love how you write Seven and Chakotay. Please update soon.

Good chapter. Hope you continue it!

I hope to see much more from this story and any other creation of yours. Your stories are truly inspiring! HM

A very interesting tale being woven here, I like this a lot

One small thing, Arturis's ship was called the Dauntless not Prometheus. Prometheus was the Starfleet ship the Doctor was sent to in Season 4 by the Hirogen Communication Network that the Romulans had taken over

Good luck with your coursework and exams honey!

Seven's sandcastles were slightly disturbing. But I really liked your introduction to her playing with the holographic filter on her implants! Naomi was wonderful as always!

I like the easy interaction you have going between Chakotay and Seven. Dealing with the Captain seems to have left them seeing each other as equals which is something you rarely see, in the show or in fanfiction. In fact, it's a far better working relationship than Chakotay and Janeway ever managed! (Which shows that C7 is obviously a better couple than JC!)

Great job and I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this now that I'm all caught up with your fics! :)

Good luck again!

SD04

Wow I LOVED this chapter honey. Your descriptive prose of the beach party was amazing. I could actually picture myself there, enjoying the distinctive colors of the sand, sea and sky. Sounds heavenly! I am so glad that Seven decided to attend and relaxed, especially when she was playing sand castles with Naomi. It saddened me a little when she didn't know what they were, but I smiled as she did her usual calculations in her head about the best way to build them! :)

Poor Seven has no idea of how stunning she really is, I felt tears well up when she gave in to her 'vanity' as she termed it and ordered the computer to make her implants disappear. It's a shame she didn't get to see her reflection before Chakotay arrived, and that he didn't either as she made the computer replace her implants, sighs! :(

It is obvious that Chakotay is finally realizing his attraction to Seven, all the little things he notices about her are so touching. It is just like him too to try and get the Captain to attend one last time. Janeway is really being selfish in this story by wallowing in her despair.

I really enjoyed this chapter honey. I hope your studies and exams go well. I will miss your updates! Thanks so much for writing and also your lovely review on Chances.

Nikki :)

this was wonderfully a perfect chapter if I have ever read one. I loved how wrought Seven in this chapter it was perfect. (pun intended) I loved her conversaing with celes and bill even if she dusent really like or understand someone I love how she is always trying her best to be as kind as she can be. I also love her and B'Elanna's pissing contest I always emaged the liked each out more than the outer let on ( and no not in a romantic or sexual way) its always been my line of thinking their friend-enemy's rather than anything else. I loved, loved , loved Seven and Namoi that was fantastic im glade you made them friends in this story you have no Idea how much I would of preferred this story in the episodes and the session but as I always say a fan boy can merely dream.
I also liked what you did with Sam Wildman that was perfect motherly concern.
also loved seven trying to cover up her implants that was a nice nod to human error which dispute its poor Execution it is one of my favourite episodes. ( don't judge me)
I also loved Chakotay's observation and thought on seven. he starting to see the real seven more and more and with that he will fall for her which I hope you do in this story. and yes I knoe I know I was dubus at them falling for each outer this early in the cannon but I know if you do that with will be perfect.
I do how ever have one complaint about this story so far and really its a nit pick. in the seconded chapter Janeway says the crew has earned the Borg queens wrath 100 times over for taking seven with them but that implies that the dark frontier story arc has already happed by on when in the show cannon dark frontier is mid session 5 were the episodes night is at the very start of session 5. but like I said that's a nit pic
any who sorry for rumbling but I wonted to do a prober and full review of this story because you wont be updating for a while or at he very lest less often. any who I wish you all the best with your study's.
Yours Alaster Boneman. you fan forever.