| Reviews for Desires |
|---|
Linzin5ever chapter 17 . 5/4 This story is great! You should totally continue it3 |
Debbora chapter 17 . 9/5/2019 So six years later, is chapter 18 coming soon? XD |
need more chapter 17 . 3/14/2017 I NEED MORE, at least a proper ending. |
MissLinBeifong chapter 17 . 8/5/2015 Please update ? |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/8/2015 I'll try posting chapter 18 tomorrow or the day after. Almost 2 years now. |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/20/2014 "I'll post chapter 18 by tomorrow or the day after maybe" - one year ago Ô.o Too bad, i liked this |
SkyLight342 chapter 16 . 6/15/2014 Love this story! Just a few things: add more detail within the chapters, it makes them longer and it shows growth and development within the characters. And show more of what goes on their heads, everyone wants to know what they think as the dirty stuff is happening! |
SkyLight342 chapter 17 . 8/11/2013 Loving this story! Keep on writing! |
MochiMaster chapter 17 . 6/27/2013 Omg I cant wait for the next chapter! :D |
Jams chapter 16 . 6/24/2013 Please. Update. Soon. |
ww1111 chapter 16 . 6/9/2013 Okay ... Their relationship goes too fast, Lin should resist it more (now it seems like she's just Tenzin's whore or toy when Tenzin always gets sex from her so easily even though he is a married man and has broken her heart) and does Tenzin love his children at all? I hate Pema too and I love linzin but he should maybe still act as a father too. And he should be thinking of divorcing Pema? But otherwise I think you did great job and you should keep doing more :) |
MochiMaster chapter 16 . 6/7/2013 Omg I totally think that Lin can play piano, woot woot headcanon! And dat smut, I love the Linzin smut! Update soon :) |
MochiMaster chapter 15 . 6/7/2013 Poor Tenzin cant concentrate because he's Linsane in the brain! XD |
MochiMaster chapter 14 . 6/2/2013 Soooo many feels! Gah Lin and Tenzin are so freaking perfect! I cant wait until you start updating regularly :) |
MochiMaster chapter 13 . 6/2/2013 Omg Lin falling asleep in his arms is so freaking cute! |