Okay, I have to be totally honest, this is my favorite one. I ship SmoAce so hard, and seeing them unbridled like this with your writing style... GAH, I can't even describe it. It's delicious, commanding, uncensored, every single chapter is incredible. I cannot stop reading this. Out of curiosity, will we ever see a LucciKaku one?

U know... U dont need to let Smoker curse in like every sentence. The word fuck is really overused here and im not even done with the first chapter

I am in love with your writing style, this story was hot damn. Smoker was a bit ooc at times I think, but I loved it neverthless.

While I'm normally a crazy yaoi fan girl theirs some hetero couples that I like so I was wondering if you would consider doing a one shot in this same au with ShanksxMakino... Unless Shanks already has a significant other.?

There is so much sex in this. I love it, awesome ending. I had to travel a lot today and I spent almost all if that time reading this, thanks for writing it

I'm a big fan of all your city fics, it makes it especially interesting that the stories intertwine. Keep writing good stuff, I'll be sure to follow.

PS. You spell ribs as 'rips' ten or so times in here

I've read the stories in your amazing Grand Line City series, and I have so say that this is my favorite one of the lot. Love your characterization of Ace (damn he's hot, and I love his devil-may-care attitude) and Smoker (Smo-yan is always awesome), and especially the dynamics between them.
I have a weakness for age gap pairings, and the cop-troublemaker situation makes it even better. Not to mention the smut scenes are smokin' hot (excuse the pun).
My favorite part, though, is probably when Ace brought Smoker back to Galleya and he fits right in. The image of Luffy climbing all over Smokie made me laugh and aww at the same time.

Looking forward to more from you!

I love this story! Ace and Smoker and everone else too? Awesome! I do wish you had Shanks appearing more though. (I love him) But awesome story!

ARE YOU GONNA STAY THE NIGHT?
DOESNT MEAN WE'RE BOUND FOR LIFE!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOO-OOOOOOOOO ARE YOU GONNA STAY THE NIGHT? (i had to xD)

even if you finish the series, please don't stop writing - I LOVE YOUR WORK SO FUCKING MUCH, BRAH 3

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU -taken to an asylum- UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU -tied in straitjacket- UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU -placed in private room- UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU -muffler shoved in mouth, faint- uuuuuuuuuuuuuu... -people get fucking pissed-

FUCK, I LOVE YOU GOD FUCKING DAMNIT -screaming and fangirling at once-

XD love the ending

will you be the father of my babies O_O

I am a shit head. I really am. I wanted to comment here on and I commented on Archive Of Our Own. I cant' say how imbecile I feel at the moment. Btw I won't repeat myself, I just wanted to add that I really hope someday you'll want to write again about this couple. Your style is somehow hypnotic or something like that.. intoxicating maybe, or maybe it's just so fucking rare to find a well written SmoAce.. idk, but when I read the last word, I felt the emptiness I feel when I finish a good book and I want more (I'm craving for a sequel).
Anyway, thank you for sharing :)
Alice

One of my favourite stories I've ever read! You displayed the pairing very well too xx