Oh, a wonderful oneshot!

OK, first... the enter key or the break tag is your friend. One paragraph stories are hard on the eyes. Though, I do admit that you have a nice way with description. I didn't see any horrbily misspelled words either. It's just in your formatting. I hope it's , though, that screwed it up, because this is a great story otherwise.

Wonderful.

hummm...yummy story...Love it! write more!

EEEEE~! I WANT A SEQUEL~!

Schu: O.O

Aya: o.o

Inno: *squeals* That was Kawaai~!...And freaky at the ending...but hey...*grin* I like~!

Great story, love it!

I love Aya/Schu fictions. It's my favourite pairing.

all of you out there: Please write more Schu/Aya-ficcies! Puhleaze! *begs*

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I like this story ! Can you write another one ? PLEASE?

I lovethis paring

Ah, that's what I like to see...blood and fire. And a bittersweet ending. Huzzah! Demo, check the format, no paragraphs! Hard on the eyes! . *dashes off to drool over Aya and Schuldich*