this was an amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it! Mine me asking where you found your cover picture?

I was like 'what the fucking hell just happened?!' I think Natsu's reaction towards the agency matter is lacking, even if he's an idiot. His thoughts about Daddy Igneel's lacking. It's a great story though. But I was expecting the ending to be on the lines of 'at the drop off, an ice mage decided it's best to take revenge on Igneel. But before the sneak attack land on him, Natsu still on magic restraints, jumped and covered him. The attack cost him a great damage. As he fell on the cold snow, Igneel embraced his form lovingly, tears landing on his son's pale face. CONVERSATION..REGRET CONVERSATIONS.. Natsu shuddered and when he let his final breath, a cry of anguish and pain was heard. The alliance stood frozen, surprised that the person they call a monster crumbled in defeat on his son's dead body. As Gray let a tear drop, he wished he could turn back time before he let that lance go.

And then a dark and painful past should've been mentioned on why Igneel did all those, not just because of power complex. And Natsu should have had a moment where he unconsciously said about a painful past making Gray think if the endless feud is all worth it. And Natsu should be able to atleast wiggle into the alliance's heart. In the end, the alliance won the battle but lost the war. Both of the parties came to agreement as tribute to Natsu. In those lines, you can make a sequel about resurrecting Natsu.

I wouldn't mind reading a 50 long chapter if the storu was like that but oh well, I'm not the author. And all in all, nice plot. :)

I am really curious. Wat chaptr from the manga did you got the covr picture or s it editd? Currently readng. Im too curios, i cnt help it.

I'm just HATING the fact that they all hate Natsu, it's fair enough that Igneel is hated but why can't see that Natsu isn't FUCKING like that, like Gray(supposedly) can?!

This was such a sweet story! I love how it took time for their relationship to develop, instead of just love at first sight.

Loved this fic!

Was the damned freaky person who set their ouse on fire, Igneel? I hate whoever it was! Really loved this fic!

I loved the story, it's not even funny how much I loved it. Even though I finished it all in one day, I still crave for more, please keep going. (Not in this story, or if you want to yes keep going, or in any other story)

I love love LOVE this boooooook!

awww I wish it was more... but still i'm thankful to you for taking the time to write this this story is awesome I really loved it

Good ol Natsu and Gray fighting

I really liked this story. It was certainly interesting, and I liked how it progressed, but the only thing I disliked was how short of an ending it was. Its decent, but if you had put in a scene of Gray and Natsu, it could have been better. Either way, nice work :)

Too bad that the epilogue was so short ant that we didn't see Gray & Natsu...
Anyway, I really loved this story, for me it's one of the best Gratsu story... so thank you very much!
I really hope you will writting other Gratsu stories!

Awh... 3 3 3 The feels...

*squeeeee* Whatta cute ending!