At least you're honest XD

Can't wait to see what happens, this is great

Good grief Conner, Time Traveling 101

Don't INTERFERE!

So Connor is going back (forward?) to his own time. At the end of this chapter, I'm left wanting even more, eager to know how things have changed. Another brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next! Ofc, take your time, I'll be here!

~Not knowing what the characters are saying is definitely the worse case.

Yes! He’s finally going home! I can’t wait to see what happens upon his arrival. I eagerly await the next chapter!

I can't believe I binge read this story and this is the last published chapter! And with such a cliffhanger nonetheless! I can't wait for the next update!

Hope you're doing well and I wish you have a marvelous day!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH! How the characters are portrayed, the interactions between them, the action scenes, how it is written - EVERYTHING!

Just one thing to add- when you write in a foreign language, could you please put the translations right after the exchange instead of at the ending of the chapter? It would be easier to read - for me at least

I like that on chapter 2, you actually use the welsh language and I’d know because i am welsh

I must say, I feel like there has not been enough time spent building the relationships between the characters. I don't really see any outstanding affection between Connor and Rhian, despite her claim that he is her best friend, and I feel like the "betrayed look on Edward's face" and the explanation behind it doesn't quite make sense given how little time the characters have really spent bonding in any substantial way. Not that there's anything wrong with the story – I've been hooked on it for the last several hours – but I think the character progression feels a little unnatural.

Don't really get the last few lines. They seem like they belong somewhere later in the story.

Strong start. Good writing – there is a bit of a hiccup in the first chapter with the rather abrupt and kinda rushed exposition on "Miss Delacroix," but the story moves on nicely afterwards.

HEY ITS YOU!

This is a fantastically written story, clearly a lot of thought and effort has gone into every chapter. I'm only disappointed that I didn't find this sooner! I think you've portrayed Connor's character perfectly, and the level of description is certainly something to admire.

Is there gonna be a Conner/? pairing?

Please keep the story going! It is amazing!

Connor's being corrupted by his gramps...hehe.