Reviews for The Awakening
W I S P902 chapter 11 . 3/17
Best story between these two I’ve ever read
Puzzler54 chapter 11 . 1/24
Really love this ending. Great conversation with Lucius - I was surprised he was so encouraging. Enjoyed the hesitant conversation at the end and having insight into the character thoughts. They're so cute!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Puzzler54 chapter 10 . 1/24
Awwww loved this chapter. Wow what an intense, cute conversation. I could quite imagine it with the awkward pauses and holding of breath inbetween each revelation to the other. Phew. So cute though. I liked seeing how Snape comes out of his shell more but is still him too. That must have been tricky to write.
Puzzler54 chapter 8 . 1/23
What a chapter! Wow. Deep, and great. Loved the step forward that they made. I enjoy their rare heart-to-hearts and seeing how things change. Also I like the realistic time frame. Things happen slowly, over a long period of time, and sometimes you comment "for the next week" or few weeks. Can't wait to read more tomorrow!
Puzzler54 chapter 8 . 1/23
Ps. I've had trouble signing in but I'm back on my account now so have favourited your story:D
Puzzler54 chapter 6 . 1/22
I've been reading your story for the last week. I'm sorry for the lack of reviews so far. I've been massively enjoying it; from the brilliant angst of the line manager situation, to the Snape and Hermione interactions. You've got some great comments of internal dialogues too.
My favourite chapter so far is this one. It has certainly shifted things with Snape being so vulnerable. Loved reading it.
In summary, I've been thoroughly enjoying your story!
Rene chapter 11 . 5/3/2019
Such a wonderful story! I really enjoyed the story and I love the way you write! I am definitely coming back to read more of your work!
JellyToastx chapter 11 . 12/14/2018
Oh my, this story is so lovely! It really pulls you in, and is definitely worth a read. Thank you!
robituputup chapter 11 . 9/4/2018
Lovely story! Thank you for the great reading piece!
wine witch chapter 11 . 8/11/2018
Lovely story, thank you!
ljpjcg chapter 2 . 7/4/2018
Yay so excited
ljpjcg chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
Great first chapter and I hate Molly
dapperyklutz chapter 11 . 3/25/2018
I love open-endings! Well, as long as they're a happy open-ending, I suppose hahaha. This was a great read! Thank you for writing and sharing. :)
princessplupin chapter 11 . 3/12/2018
lovely 3
CaliforniaCougar chapter 11 . 2/7/2018
short and sweet
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