| Reviews for Pretending to be Nice |
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Mega Ghost chapter 20 . 6/22 Hey, I just finished reading "Pretending To Be Nice," and I have to say I loved it. I'm an original and big Life With Derek fan, and although i was never a Daesy shipper, cause I was a kid at the time, I can see now how people could see that happening and could see it happening myself. I think you did a really good job of capturing the characters and making the whole journey of them discovering their feelings flow naturally. If you were so inclined to, I would say the only thing you might want to change/update is to add a little more to the scene where George and Nora discover it. Open minded or not, there would be a lot more shock and awe there if two people found that their kids who lived under the same roof were making out and dating. Also, even if to no one else, the fact that they're step-siblings and are related in the eyes of the law would contribute to some shouting on the part of George and Nora. On the whole though, I liked it. It made me laugh a lot, I fell in love with the idea of the two of them being together and I really felt for the two of them at various times. I could see this happening on the actual show if it hadn't been a kid's sitcom. |
tbirdstar chapter 20 . 6/6 Really great story! |
Guest chapter 20 . 3/3 Thank you for this very cute and fun story ! I'v enjoyed reading it. This is so adorable to see Derek totally in love ;) |
jcarter692 chapter 20 . 4/26/2019 I really enjoyed this story! Them at the end was incredibly adorable! Thanks for writing an amazing story! |
tiffboo85 chapter 21 . 1/7/2019 Extremely cute |
wprincessannw chapter 15 . 6/4/2018 I still really enjoy this story :) |
Michelle chapter 20 . 5/25/2018 This story was amazing. You kept Dasey in character and their story funny and sweet. Loved every word. |
Michelle chapter 13 . 5/25/2018 Loved how Derek convinced Casey to talk...;) |
Michelle chapter 12 . 5/25/2018 I so wasn't expecting Casey to kiss him there. Poor Casey running away because she thinks she freaked Derek out with the kiss. |
Michelle chapter 2 . 5/25/2018 I love how Casey not arguing with Derek is confusing him,lol. |
McSkvarkova chapter 3 . 5/22/2018 Love this story, can't wait to catch up. Everyine is in character. Derek's panic is adorable. |
feed-fat-tommy chapter 6 . 3/23/2018 Great chapter. Very sweet Dasey stuff :) |
headofneuro17 chapter 20 . 3/9/2018 This is probably the best and most in character Dasey fic I have ever read, and I have read quite a few. Absolutely amazing! |
Oriana Star chapter 20 . 7/8/2017 Amazing and so tender story! I love this couple! |
Kint0 chapter 20 . 4/15/2017 Super cute story. Loved it. |