I liked this, thanks for writing!

Good. I liked this story and Tails' point-of-view. No problems with characterization. A simple plot that was nicely and cleanly executed. As for grammar, there were a few things I could point out...

"All he could do was waiting. He was praying that everyone was save" - change "waiting" to "wait" and "save" to "safe"
"A white gloved hand appeared right in front of his eves..." I think that's a typo. I should be "eyes"

Those are the only real problems I see, nice job!

That's So Sweet :')

The feels :')

Nice story it was very brotherly

Good grammar. Reads without problems, only you don't need to put a comma after a quotation mark in cases like this:
["Sonic!", he cried again]

Nothing revolutionary in terms of plot, but nothing questionable either. Just a sweet brotherly story that is good to read on a slow hour.

- Qwisse.

Nice story.