| Reviews for The Sixth on the List |
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Moniurek chapter 1 . 12/7/2017 Cute and funny |
Sirnonenath chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 Adorable. This left me with a lot of warm fuzzy feelings. Thank you for sharing! |
Rasial chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 I also sat down to figure out the list and came to the same conclusion as you as to rankings. :D |
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 Liked this. |
Wesley1501 chapter 1 . 5/4/2014 This is so well written. Enjoyed it greatly. Would like to see you update some of your other Sweets stories. |
Lucy's Echos chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 This was really sweet I loved it! |
Jenny1701 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 I loved it and I too was struck by the way Booth was so specific in his choice of numbers - very well reasoned out and i think you nailed it. Well written and interesting story. Jenny |
Sorkin's Gal Friday chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 This is really sweet. Just one little quibble: I don't think Booth would rank either of his children above the other; he would feel like a bad father if he consciously played favorites, so they would be tied for second. But, I realize that you probably had to work it out that way for the sake of the story. Nice work, though. I enjoyed this. |
ebrillblaiddes chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 Amusing and consistent with characters. More like this would be a good thing :) |
TheSneakyHobo chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 Oh my gods! This was the cutest thing I've ever read! Well done! ! ! |
ratgirl71 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 I liked it. I can absolutely see Sweets rationalizing and explaining everything on what is essentially an imaginary list! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 No, M, you should definitely NOT limit yourself to angst! This was a beautiful little peek inside Sweets' mind and I think you really pegged him, really had his voice and his personality. I laughed initially when I saw the title and the synopsis because I had reacted to Booth's comments the same way when the episode aired - "Sixth!? How can there be six whole people he loves more than Sweets? So wrong." - and after the show was over I sat and tried to reason out the list just as you had Lance doing. Funny too, I came up with the same list, right down to Jared, although limbo reader has a good point about their strained relationship. Anyway, there are so many small details that make this story come to life, from the ticking clock and Sweets' increasing annoyance with it to the description of his wadded up paper as a yellow snowball. And I love the balance of fluff - the overall spirit and theme of the story and Lance's quirky and adorable personality - to the serious undertones - "I almost died today and I'm not ready to deal with that just yet." Lovely lovely lovely and don't you dare give up writing fluff for Sweets! :D |
limboreader chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 This was a nice read from the always interesting perspective of Sweets. Throwing a kink into the second half of his introspection, though, I highly doubt Jared would make a list of favorite people. He loves him, yeah, but I don't think he likes him enough for fave people status. BUT that being said, from Sweets' perspective, he may not see it that way. Wonderful little shot either way! |
silverL1N1NGS chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Such a cute idea. Well written. |
Jo-Bar chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Oh my gosh, I love this so so so much! I was literally covering my face while reading the last part, it was so sweet and cute and just/ aaagh3 Amazing story! And thanks so much for the review on my story, btw. You're the best! :))) |