Reviews for Slow Down A New Beginning
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
Are you going to update this soon or not because a lot of people might be waiting on you to update it because you have been 6 years since you have updated it
AsunderRaven chapter 11 . 4/5
nooo need more to bad your not writing dam this outbreak
CampPillow chapter 11 . 2/22
The new ash is awesome! And his team too, love how you make these and have em turn out better than other stories. Liked it a lot, hope your feeling up to making the next chapter! Good luck!
Tilty.bbb chapter 11 . 1/28
This was a fantastic read well done
Megan Lyle chapter 11 . 10/19/2019
Wow! This is a interesting and exciting story! Please keep writing.
Toxin chapter 11 . 8/14/2019
I know it's been a few years, but this story is incredible! I hope you update soon :)
Trithankar chapter 11 . 6/17/2019
Bro, when are you going to post next?
Please do so soon. It is an interesting story to read afterall.
Read from you soon hopefully.
Andy Braginsky chapter 11 . 6/5/2019
Recommendations for names (I really hope Brock and Misty give all of their pokemon names at some point).
Shellder: Seamus ["It is of Irish and Hebrew origin, and the meaning of Seamus is "he who supplants".
Read more at meaning/1/Seamus#H4VyZsLjFy0SSbgg.99"]
Goldeen: Edris [Wealthy ruler]
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Cleffa: Either Usa/Usagi, Serenity, Selene, or Kaguya [All based on moon princesses]
Onix: Ollivander, Omni, Optimus, Onni
Geodude: George, Gregor, Gerlach, Geovanni (the irony XDDD)
STARSONGPAPA chapter 6 . 2/26/2019
sylveon is my vote
zubhanwc3 chapter 4 . 2/22/2019
okay, so far, this story is amazing. I've known about it for a while, but the summary didn't really appeal to me. I'm just glad I finally gave it a shot
Gerninjagamer chapter 11 . 2/7/2019
First off, Love the story! and second, can we see ash catch latios?
TsukiGundamZero chapter 11 . 11/13/2018
Por favor continua tu historia me encanto, los nuevos pokemon, y las diferentes personalidades son muy interesantes
Tristi Lynne chapter 11 . 9/5/2018
I love this story so far. Will you be coming back to it anytime soon? When you did the team listings for Misty's team you have goldeen instead of feebas.
Silverserpent74 chapter 2 . 3/31/2018
Did ash suddenly get better after getting swarmed by a flock of pecking and scratching fearow.
kraftues chapter 5 . 3/10/2018
You know Thorndsword? The one who 'flamed' it was constructive criticism, not enough to make it a flame. Crap is actually quite a down rated word, use 'shit' or something, you T rated the story so people won't give a fuck about the words. Well you can do this 'fu. Not a flame, this is just a point out.
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