Oh my gosh yes! I thought Donnie was having the dream-but IT WAS RAPH! Mind explodes

I think this story is perfect!

Can’t believe I have not read this before! It was fantastic! I’m still loving these two characters and was very happy to find this work. Too many favourite parts to comment on. I really liked the way the wasp affected the boys, Raph included. Now I have to go back and reread all of your other stuff. Well done!

This work is darn near perfect! I couldn’t find a single error in the whole thing! The only reason I say that it’s near perfect is because there’s no such thing as perfect. Thanks so much for sharing it it really is wonderful.

WONDERFUL! the love scene, the suspicious brother and Raph finally admitting his feelings only to accidentally cause doubts in April about if Donnie really loves her for being her or if she's just the first girl they knew of. except for Leo who has a crush for Karai

I did think "wait, What?" when i read the part about the crack in the shell. wondering if it was a mistake, but nice angle for complicated relationship

I love playful banter and working up to those steamy moments. Its like the sauce to a well cooked pizza

I truly enjoy how you add so much detail without making everything feel blah. having trouble trying to do that with my stories, especially with how get the character voices out so the readers know whose talking without it sounding like a play script

The titles may be cheesy but there functional

Love the pipe bursting scene. classic way to throw water on a hot topic

aaaaAAAAAAAAA I am NOT OKAY, I rEPEAT, nOT O. KAY.

And this chapter made me oh so very happy, especially the first part *wink*

But... Raph... my feelings are a bit sore, now. But it's still amazingly written, and I love it oh-so much. 3

Loved it. Thank you for taking the time to write it. I read it all in two sittings! 3

I can't, I'm so sorry, I tried ,I really did, but I just couldn't continue reading ,it's just a human x turtle , god no , you write beautifully but I do not like the pairing , I can try reading incest better then this pairing , and it's not you author it's me and what I like , sorry if you thought I was rude .

I like that you had a bonding moment with April and her aunt

Just finished the last two chapters! A triumph. Truly a triumph. I've bookmarked this story and will be searching for others you have written in future days. Thanks for sharing your wealth of talent for us. All your readers appreciate it.