I loved this story!
It was an emotional ride!
It was nice to see they got their happily ever after!
Hope you continue to write!

DUUUUDE. This story is so insane and unique. I love it. Sooooooo much.

Both Edward and Bella's behavior is unhealthy and codependent. But this is fic, (and I know there's an HEA) so their love, their passion and their total dedication to each other is powerful and I am am so rooting for this couple. Edward truly gave his whole entire heart to Bella and that was beautiful. I loved that once he knew he loved her, he didn't put on a front for others. He didn't care who knew, in fact he wanted the entire hood to know. I'm glad that Carlisle and Esme made a family and a life, that Edward and Bella were a big part of it, that Emmett and Jasper and Alice were all still close.

My poor stomach is still tied in knots.

I don't have words. A boy is dead. He may have been way out of line, but now he's dead. Might have happened anyway at some point especially since he seemed hellbent on being affiliated, but it happened at Edward's hand, because Edward felt disrespected. Damn.

As soon as Edward hopped in that van with Los and his boys, I know what's going to go down. There's no way that the boys in red don't perceive the boys in blue as a threat, especially the way they're rolling up on them after Nes was pushing up on Bella. Edward has to know what could go down as soon as they see them roll up. This has my stomach tied in nervous knots. Damn.

It's really nice that Carlisle can hang out and chill with his son and them that way. And that he can share words of wisdom and caution while not being a downer. The line from Friday was funny.

That talk between Edward and Carlisle was, wow. I just wish that Edward would cut out the slinging. His dad is so hopeful and so proud. He's going to be devastated when shit hits the fan.

Glad you finished

Edward is displaying qualities of an abusive boyfriend. I dint think he'd ever physically strike her or hurt her in that way. But- he controlling, manipulative and he tried to get her knocked up. He's feeling insecure and maybe unworthy. That's only going to get worse as she gets more into college. He's going to self sabotage if he doesn't get it together. Pulling a gun on Demetri May have been a huge mistake because now he can't trust his uncle. I hate the thought of him getting deeper into the game. And he's carrying this stuff in his work van. If he gets stopped in the van while he's holding, that work van will be impounded. I know that's not the biggest of his concerns, but that would be insult on top of injury for Carlisle.

I'm with Edward on this one. He's too bossy and mad disrespectful to her parents, and females in general-like his father said, but he was a good heart. And he's right about Bella. Maybe not her intentions, but everything else. And she's definitely acting her age-which of course he can't begrudge her for. She acts young, because she IS young. Hopefully Edward doesn't go do anything stupid-just goes to cool off. Bella maybe needs to go to Queens. Slow down, mature a little. They can start over. She's not his wife and he's not her daddy. They're playing house and the roles are getting confused. And I think maybe Bella was more rude than called for with Tanya. She should've let Edward handle that situation, unless or until Tanya dissed her or stepped to her. Edward should've called Tanya back and told her he had a girl. Maybe could've avoided the entire confrontation.

Yeah I don't buy that Edward hit on Rose. He never showed an ounce of interest in her. He told Bella he didn't like loose girls, so Rose was probably not at all his type. Doesn't mean he wouldn't hit it, but-I think he was all about Bella that night. Emmett too, lol. And Rose couldn't stand it.

So glad they talked. I was expecting things to go sideways between them. I like that thugWard can be sensitive and in touch with his feelings. And Bella opened up.

Damn drugs, hope she cuts that shit out. She's mixing shit too. Dangerous.

I'm so conflicted. I don't know how to feel about Edward, or Emmett. Edward might be a player, but Bella was more than willing to get with him for a one night stand or fling. Not only was she willing, she was initially the one who pushed it. So I don't really have an issue with Edward scheming to get Emmett out of the way. Rose is an whole nutha story though. She's supposed to be Bella's girl. Supposed to have her back. Friends who are jealous and vindictive if they are not the center of attention are dangerous to have around. You can never really trust when one friend left the club, all of them was supposed to be out. Girls don't let their girl just roll out with strangers. We can be mad later, but we're still making sure we all get home safely! And AT least one needs to be sober! As for Emmett, I can't figure out his intentions. He says he's only concerned for Bella's well-being, but he was making moves on her from the very beginning. I think there is some genuine concern that Edward will drag Bella down, but I also think Emmett is jealous. They all set out the hook up that night they went out. He had no problem with that situation until Bella caught his interest. If Edward is such bad news why does he let Edward pay his rent. He knows where that money comes from, and has no problem using it for his benefit. That being said it's not awful for him to want to warn her off Edward if his truly believes what he's saying, but then he needs to let it drop and allow her to make her own decisions. She shouldn't have let Edward push her to slice Phil's tire. But I love that he knew she was in trouble and needed him. He swooped in, and I love that. I just wish she'd have gone to his room like he asked her too. He is super bossy though. She definitely needs to call her mom to let her know she's safe. And Alice needs to fess up about her age. I'm so glad she didn't sleep with Jasper yet.