GREAT WAR! AND I CANNOT TAKE MORE!

GREAT TOUR! AND I KEEP MARCHING ON!

I PLAY THE GREAT SCORE! THERE WILL BE NO ENCORE!

GREAT WAR! THE WAR TO END ALL WARS!

Sorry I still have some hype about the new Sabaton album: The Great War

Hey, dude are you dead or something. Because there hasn’t been an update in 4 years.

Pretty great storyline, phenomenal characters, lovely references to other video games, but didn’t have a ending; 9/10

Uh nvm.

Ooohhh times are reaching towards the Modern Age?

WW1 related?

Hmmm...

Hello Sentinel07! I just wanted to say, I've read through EVERY chapter of your fic, and I can't believe you just suddenly stopped working on it! this might be the best Kid Icarus fanfic I've EVER read! I don't suppose you'll ever get back to it? Does anyone here know what happened to Sentinel07?

Valley of Hope? Sounds like a Pikmin reference

Amazing. I just binge read the entire thing. Amiridi has a sword called two. "Swei is 2 in German" I just kinda found that funny.

Did you get the idea of Brionac from Kingdom Hearts? Also, I like how Orphan makes an appearance, will Bahamut be in here too?

Hey, I love this fanfic and I was wondering when you will update it. I need to see more chapters! :(

I've been following this story for a little while, read all the chapters up to this one. It's a fantastic story, but not just for the plot, characters, and all the little storytelling nuances. No, it's something more than that.

Kid Icarus: Uprising created a world, and you've pushed that world to it's limits.

Engaging, creative, original characters that undergo real character development roam a world full of incredibly unique locations that could really exist in the game using powerful, thought out weaponry that I wouldn't mind owning myself. You've taken a universe full of potential and, rather than squander it, mentally explored and probed it with an open mind.

I'm going to offer some constructive criticism here. In my opinion, some of the chapters overstay their welcome. While I appreciate the extra effort, sometimes story supersedes details. Other than that, I find fault in nothing else.

Thanks for making this such an enjoyable experience, I hope you continue to write with the same amount of talent and imagination that you've displayed thus far.

P.S. How do you write this story, anyway? Do you have a plan/outline laid out, of do you write the plot as it comes to you.

Finally, I caught up with this heck of a beast fanfic!
To start off, the OCs. I'm suprised how it all went and how you made sure everyone got their parts properly. Normally for my experience with OC stories... I don't wanna say it because I'll sound like a hypocrite since my own fanfic involves OCs. I loved the character developments though. Kudos to you for that!
Next, the story itself... I really can't say anything because the story was beautifully written! Seriously, this could make a legit sequel to Uprising! Some parts I had to laugh quietly because I don't wanna look like a weirdo.
One thing I do have to say though, what's with you guys and popcorn? Other than that, congratulations on grabbing my attention! (I'm kinda picky with my fanfics) Best of luck to whatever you're doing now!

I love this fanfic! Sure the other game references were making me crack my computer screen from smacking my head off it, but it's still really awesome!

I hope yo update this soon, cause the last note about the dimensional collapse is leaving us hanging here!

Man noire should hang out with krona from soul eater

Hey. This is an amazing story. You've done a great job. Keep up the good work.