| Reviews for jack o' lanterns in july |
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vwheel10 chapter 4 . 9/10/2019 It actually... kind of is fitting... |
Briar Ruler chapter 4 . 11/25/2016 (Laughs) I was happily rooting for Itachi to win the whole time. I loved Itachi’s relationship with Kisame; the friendship, trust and loyalty between them. I lie that Kisame’s loyalty is unwavering and that Itachi truly cares about him. Honestly I think that Itachi is one of those terrifying people who could take over the world if they wanted to, but that who is highly unlikely to want to in the first place. Unfortunately (or perhaps fortunately) this Itachi has a reason to take control of the world and nothing is going to stop him. This really shows you the reason you want Itachi on your side and I really like that. |
Briar Ruler chapter 1 . 11/25/2016 Itachi would have made a good Hokage. A lot of what Madara did was for Izuma because he loves his brother and with Itachi as his little brother instead things certainly would have turned out differently. And this Itachi is likely happier than Canon Itachi too. I like how you’ve shown both Madara's and Itachi’s personalities and the decisions they make in this. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/22/2014 Konan and Itachi make an interesting pair, as entertaining as Kisame and Itachi - but perhaps with more subtleties in their conversation xD This was a nice series. Thanks for sharing and hope to see more from you! :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/22/2014 i almost feel like rooting for Itachi's Moon Eye Plan in this chapter... XD the parallels between Itachi and Kisame, and Haku and Zabuza are nicely done. But of course it ended better here, heh |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2014 This was equally lovely. Your Kushina is lively, blunt, sharp and caring. Only she would counsel Itachi against joining ANBU, and i think he needed the affirmation of his decision. A joy to read. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/22/2014 When i saw this scenario i got legitimately worried, but i think it ended as well as it could have. Minato's Team 7 is together, and Itachi would probably never have to kill again. I'm glad Kakashi made it up with him :) and i definitely can see the two of them butting heads as teenagers! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2014 Ahh...if only it happened like this ;_; Great concept and writing style! :) thanks for sharing! |
HoloXam chapter 5 . 8/29/2013 Nice to lay my eyes on some well done in-character Itachi-work! Thank ya! |
outloux chapter 5 . 8/22/2013 I know that years from now, I will always come back to fanfiction to re-read this story. I'm sorry, but every chapter of this fic was amazing, each portraying Itachi in a different light, each portraying Itachi slightly different. You've managed to bring new levels of amazing to an already amazing character. I'm not sure how you did it, but I know I won't stop thinking about this fic for a while. Personally, my favorite chapter was actually the despot one. I just keep thinking of Haku and Zabuza, and guh, I can't even describe it. anyway, thanks so much for yet another great fic, -truth |
not the usual baka chapter 4 . 5/10/2013 Itachi and Kisame working together to take over the world! |
not the usual baka chapter 2 . 5/10/2013 Doing the bare minimal Itachi, don't think I have read Itachi like this before. But this way, Kakashi won't have to make friends with the memorial Stone everyday. |
not the usual baka chapter 1 . 5/10/2013 Itachi as the younger brother, interesting. Coughing his lungs out and still following the idealistic dream. Tobirama should be happy he won't have to deal with the paperwork. |
WraithReaper chapter 5 . 5/6/2013 Great chapter! Are you going to keep going? Or is this it? Either way, it's good. |
WraithReaper chapter 4 . 5/5/2013 Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |