| Reviews for If You Could See Him Now |
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Sesshomarusama3 chapter 2 . 1/4/2017 I loved this so darn much I swore I shed a tear :'D |
ashlynhope28 chapter 2 . 2/18/2015 I absolutely loved this story! Thank you for posting it! :) |
LauSamOuille chapter 1 . 6/20/2014 Hey ! It's me ! (Mario !) Really sweet story, you had me in tears shame on you ! I'm going to read the others ! |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2013 Cute. |
SnowyDawn17 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 XD Sabo, we ALL believe him when Luffy says he'll be pirate king. Luffy's just like that, ya know? This is almost EXACTLY how I'd imagine Sabo reacting to Luffy in the New World, and what he's say to Ace |
shit bruh chapter 2 . 7/25/2013 ;w; |
shit bruh chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 WAIT WAIT HOLD UP. Did you make up the whole thing of Luffy and Sabo meeting in the new world? or is it all a piece of baloney? If if they meet ;w; I would be so happy I would probably cry. |
readasifallbookswillburn chapter 2 . 7/18/2013 I'm with Deadly in Pink. Good idea. What was Sabo expecting? He did say it a hundreds time, I'll beat you. IT IS PAINFUL TO HEAR! Only being strong enough to save something after it's lost. Like not knowing how to solve a problem, and you figure it out later but much much more tragic, painful, sorrowed and crushing. Luffy must have felt like it was a dream at first, or not believed his eyes. Natural reaction. I like Sabo meets Luffy scenes. I've read one where it was Sabo meets Ace and it was still disappointing because in the end he still died without knowing Sabo lived. He must be looking for Sabo in the afterlife unless he's a ghost which actually would be preferable. Then he could cause havoc in the Whitebeards Ship or Luffy's. I vote 'nother chapter (ironic since I just came from sending you a post message about requests) but we want more. It's not as damaging as cigarettes(not frowning upon you if you smoke, freedom!) but still as addicting. |
angelrider13 chapter 2 . 7/2/2013 AsakifsalihjKHSISNdkAndaIUhfdaiuhfiSUchnSIUFhyizDU hfksjnxLUIYFHSFHLHSFLIUDHGwi! This was BEAUTIFUL. I loved it. So much. Great job! :D |
Ujvari chapter 2 . 6/8/2013 God, this made me cry... You did wonderful! There is never enough ASL-Love! |
The voice of all things chapter 2 . 5/26/2013 Aww, I really love Sabo reunion scenes. You should definitely write another chapter! I'd love to see some more Sabo/Luffy interaction, maybe even talking about what happened to Ace. |
scratchienails chapter 1 . 5/10/2013 (I love your username) Awww, that was cute. Except, maybe not enough guilt on Sabo for letting Ace die without doing anything? I like how he mentions fighting with Luffy, and that he'd thought Lu was dead. It does serve him right! Glad that you put that little comment in there. And the end made me teary eyed. Great job! |
Bread chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Bahhh! Make more! How would Luffy react? Your a great writer! Blahhareaghthrib! Lol anywho I hope you continue this! It's really good... And stuff... SABOOO! |