I hate you. I hate you. I swear to god if I ever see you I will fillet you like a fish. I will gut you. How dare you leave it as a goddamn cliff hanger! Oh my god. I swear I'm gonna cut you open one day. I cannot, for the life of me, believe how you could ever EVER end it in that!

Oh my goddddd. Satoshi seemed like he liked her! Damn. And I can totally imagine Mayaka and Hotaru together! Why. I was doing so well not imagining them together!

I like Oreki and Eru but I just love Mayaka. There's something that I just can't stop liking about her. She's just... Amazing.
I wish you'd written a happy ending though.

lol. you're right, it's not what i was expecting... but this story is innocently cute. i still enjoyed it, nonetheless.

I'm watching Hyouka now and I was craving some Oreki/Mayaka. I just love their dynamic and how they are so snide with each other, but at the same time you can tell they do care about each other as friends. I'm babbling. anyway you really captured their characters in this and it was a joy to read. It was very well written and the emotions felt real.

This was a brilliant piece of work, I loved the subtlety of the dialogues, of the characters in expressing their thoughts and emotions, though I would have loved if we had a little bit of Houtarou as well. However it was still beautiful.

Thank you for writing this.

Oh, this was sweet and beautifully written. I love it. The descriptions and feels!

Wait sherlock never said that? For real!?

This is a very interesting AU. I like it :)

ahhh, i don't know why i love your houtarou and mayaka centered fics so much—i guess i feel like you just write their dynamic extremely well! anyway; this was brilliant, and having the entire situation from satoshi's perspective was absolutely fitting in context. really, really nice job.

AUUUUUGH AJDKALJDKAJWK I NEED CONTINUATION...I SHIP THIS A LOT NOW?

uwahhh this is unique! and it's good!
I feel sorry for Satoshi though...

I would like a continuation of this!

Oh my god. Oh my god. Ohhhhh my godddd! I can't breathe right now. This is everything I needed. I just hoped that one day I'd get at least SOMETHING involving with these two, and here it is - exactly what I wanted. In-character, clever and utterly beautiful... not mention slightly tinged with heartache. Thank you.

Oh my godd this is not good for my shipper heart T_T Satoshi falling in love with Mayaka only to have to watch her love Oreki? Asshdfljgaaaa I can't even ksoysitaur

I love all your stories and they're so well-written and in character every single time, but I have to question if I'm a masochist because you make me so sad for the characters that it can't be good for me, and yet I won't miss reading a single story you publish. ;_; Keep making us cry for Satoshi and Mayaka!

Oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god

I don't know how I feel about this ahhhhhh

I don't know, I like to stick with the corny and nonsensical belief that, in parallel universes, the people who you were destined to fall in love with will still be there, and you two will still fall in love. I think I figure there's no way it can be verified or not so I just go with it for kicks.

Oh it's crushing to see something like this happen. To be Satoshi and to have to watch the events of the person you so clandestinely (even to yourself) love unfold before your eyes and there's nothing you can do. To see the train tracks shifted for a turn for the worse (for you) up ahead a few miles and to sit patiently as your train approaches the curve.

It's fics like these that tease and let you glimpse behind some sort of partially-transparent veil into a place where everything is altered, where everything works out in the best possible way, even though you can't experience it, that I love. I don't know why, I guess I just love torturing myself. (And metaphors, evidently.)