Loved it to its very core! Such a beautiful story with such a strong meaning behind it that I got kind of teary near the end. The way you described the facts from Piko's point of view really got me going and it was really straight on the point, but I think above all I adored the ending with the "Why not" question :) Excellent job! :)

Ah ;A;

This breaks my heart, but especially after reading the prequel. It hurts me to see it end this way. But I wad wondering (oh, wow, I won't be surprised if you deny me) if I could have permission to write what happens after this one shot? Where Miki lives? You don't have to say yes if you feel it will be a bastardization of what you wanted for your fan fiction. But I can't stand for it ending this way! It just makes me too sad! D:

I know it's a request you may not agree to, but I ask your permission to write my ending. xo

I hope that you are doing well and that you will respond to me. ;w;

Gosh I read the prequel when I saw the summary. It ends so sad! Poor... both of them.

This... This killed me. Especially after reading Safe from Harm. This is beautifully written. I can almost hear him laugh grimly at the end. Lovely.

Aw. Poor Miki. I've been verbally and physically abused, but not to the point of suicide (yet. Yeah, I know in one story I said I haven't but i lied. Whoops.) they coulda, woulda, shoulda been the cutest family. Like, ever. Good fanfic, although it's, like depressing. (Aw, well. Those tend to be the best). Now, as much as I would love to read more, I needa sleep since I have a plane flight to catch at 3am. URG.

...I rant too much don't I -.-"

Tears?! What I don't cry!*starts crying like a baby* good story! :)

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NUUUUU! MIKI! COME BACK AND HAVE BABIES WITH PIKO! /shot

Lol yeah. IohaxMikixPiko (miki's in the middle) or just plain MikixPiko.

*tear*
*tear*
*tear*
WAAAAAHHHHH *starts bawling at top of my lungs*
This was so, so, so sad... Why Miki? WHYYYYYYYYYY. Ok I'm done with my sad rant *sniffles*

I totally agree with you about the MikixPiko thing. They'reone of my absolute favourite couples. I wrote two MikixPiko fics that were somewhat sad too. But they had a happy ending. Go check it out! *shamelessly self-promotes*. Anyways, Miki seems like such a sweet person that doesn't deserve that. I hope Safe from Harm doesn't end like this... but it probably will. So, I'm off to read Safe from Harm!

Is Safe From Harm gonna end like this?! Please, no! I'm crying a river over here! Good oneshot, Mizune-chan!

i hope this is not how your 'safe from harm' fic is gonna end its to depressing to be the ending to such a beautiful story.

...Whoah.
What did I just read.
Kidding, kidding. I think.
Moving on.
That was well-written. It's sad that stuff like this actually happens. I'm glad someone actually decided to write about something like this.
And... and that last part...
Gahh. My eyes fell out of its sockets when I saw the word pregnant. I'm sure everyone else's did as well. Or was it just me.
And I really like that last part.
Why? Why do I like it?
Well, why not?

...XD Sorry. But, really, I liked that part. It's like something of a twist kind of thing.
Thank you for writing this. Hope to see more soon :3
Sparklyyou're welcome :3 XD

Reads this.

PREGNANT?

ASFOJLGHGBROGYIO.

Also, thank you for not writing 'she suicided'. You have no idea how happy that makes me.

OHOHO I SEE YOU'RE MOVING ONTO THE PIKO/MIKI FANDOM NOW. ATTA GIRL!

*and yes I'm aware the review is crappy but there's junk food in my system so until I get some detox by chomping more apples/green veggies it's not going to be normal. Normal-er. Whatever my normal is.*

GREAT FIC!

OMG... That was... That was so freaking awesome! x3 I feel so sorry for Miki! I'm with Piko on this... Someone gimme a gun, I'm ready to commit murder! ;) I DON'T EFFING CARE IF I FREAKING GET SENT TO A MENTAL WARD!

Miki was pregnant?! The. FUDGE?! Piko, what'ya been doing to her?! Well, as long as you didn't bang her DAILY, then I'm freaking fine with it! ;)

Sorry for all the crazyness in this review. I've just had a really retarded day today... *makes a derp face and giggles* And Friday is my friend's b-day, and she's crazy, so when I come back home, and you update on that day, expect a really retarded review from me! ;)

All in all, really awesome oneshot! I love insanity in stories! Should I be put in a mental ward...? Nah, no mental ward can hold this! ... I need to stop eating candy... *eats chocolate* xD

Brought tears to my eyes. PikoxMiki is best pairing.

YAY I GET A SPARKLY THANKS! SPAAARKLES! X3

I actually really like PikoxMiki. I think it's my second favourite couple after... do I even need to say it? xD

But...but this was so sad! Poor, poor Piko and Miki. I'm pretty sure the bullies would feel terrible after reading something like that. And it's so much worse she was with a child ;_;

By the way, I REALLY liked the use of the 'Well, why not?' throughout it. It gave the story that extra touch :D