I feel weird for liking this

Oooh, I like the balance of smut, fluff, and sappy romance in this. I thought the little things about them were really cute- like how Alfred always gives a compliment along with his harsher bedroom talk.

Yes... yes yes yes...! xD

God, this is Freaking PERFECT !

It was Sexy and Hot and Sweet and Lovely in the same time !

Love Love Love ! I IN LOVE WITH IT !

Arthur is mischievous sexy sweetheart! Alfred is Awesome Hot sweetheart!

LOVE IT! *heart full of loves*

Possessive Alfred is possessive ;) sweet smut and lovely cuddling, you have done a good job XD *thumbsup*
I believe this is good enough though I'm not good with grammar and such, so I can't help much. I"m sorry.
But this is going to be in my favourite archive! XD

love, you're talented as hell. you should—no, you /better/ do post more stories, because hell, you've got a lot of potential and i'd want to see more of your writing. It's honestly captivating. i'm not forcing you, but i do encourage you to write more. a lot. especially smut. like this. hot fuckin damn.

excuse me while i run to the bathroom to get extra tissues

im going to be ridiculously and embarrassingly honest with you because right now this damn story of yours made me seriously horny and i can't do anything and do you know how damn frustrating this is

(...*blushes furiously*)

fytgubugjhb but that's a good sign. definitely a good sign. even though now im sexually frustrated because of a fan fiction about two idiots asshumping otherwise it's perfect and i love it i just hate you for this frustration right now but i love it and i'll shut up now bye

This... This is one of the best stories I've read! It was sweet, HOT, and well written! This was your first? You, madame, are talented.
And I would like to mention that I would LOVE to see a follow up to this. Perhaps the actual visit to LA (with the steamy, engagement sex included?) Just a suggestion.
I reaally can't wait for more from you!

Sweetie, do us all a favor, and write more UsUk smut/fanfics. You are the best fucking author I have ever come across. And this is your first one!? You, my dear, are absolutely gifted!

I scour the net looking for fic as good and perfect as this amd im a little lost for words because this was sooo good. Thank you heaps for writing and sharing with us, it was really an awesome piece

This is your first smut? Baby you're a natural. This was great.

It's both lovely and sensual as hell and omgigotmassiveboner asdfghjkl! XD

Sequel!

omg this was awesome awesome awesome PRUSSIA worthy awesome! (）

This is too good, one of my new favourites. I would love a sequel this one was both sweet and super sexy :D

This is absolutely brilliant. If you ever expand on this story, perhaps to the meeting of Alfred's parents, I will be absolutely ecstatic to read it. But if not, then it doesn't change the fact that this is still an amazing story. And I mean AMAZING!