The imagery for the fight was good enough. Not spectacular, but definitely believable. My only complaints for the past two chapters are that the word choice variety seems lacking.
"A look of _ was plastered on _'s face," and "he walked over to _" are heavily used, and it takes away from the flow.
Perhaps this is unfair, as this fic was written back in 2013, and I expect that your skill has improved since. But I must encourage anyone writing a long-winded war story to use more of a variety in descriptors. There's nothing wrong with using a couple choice phrases a few times, but be sure that they are spread across the whole story, and not heavily used in just a few chapters.

Once again, I will definitely continue reading. The plot is the driving force of this story, and I'm eager to see how this AU Link will become the hero that Hyrule needs.

I really like the dramatic tone of this story so far. True, I may have discovered it a bit late to really give pertinent feedback, but there is one typo towards the end.

"He a sharp glare in his eyes that said..."
You're missing a "had" in there.

Other than that, the flow and depictions of the characters in this AU are quite convincing. Will definitely continue reading.

More. I need more. Anyway does Nabooru come in here? Ia she Ganondorf's lover? *evil giggling* I mean, there is no shame in bodies~ lol
ANYWAY Great chap! I hope you do more COZ I LOVE IT. Why? Coz I do.

Zelda...
...
...
...
I love you are your writing and everything but...
*blegh*
Anyway I really thunk you should try to put a little nore details in your chaps, they're good. Just a little more detail.

Awwe but I always like Sheik. Oh boo. I never liked Zelda anyway, I might have done the same thing.

Depressing? Hm... oh well, sucker much? MUAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAGAGAHGAGAGAGAGAGAGAG
VICTOORYYYYYYYYY! BOOM YEAH!

This excellent. Great job with Zelda and Impa and Sheik and Lucien and all the good people aww yeah! But, woe, if only Zelda knew the truth, *MuahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHA-Cough* sorry.

VICTORY!

First, yes Mido. Team Ganondorf is where it's at.
Second, yes. I hate Viana. Oooh I hate him so much.

Omd. I love this. YA YA YA YAH HAH! YAY! RUSL! LINK! EPONA! WHOOP! I only hope Gan doesn't turn bad in the end. (Author don't let me down X)

Woah! Plot twist! Already!? I did not see that coming! Ganondorf? Whoop! ... alright. You've impressed me. I will read.

I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next! More so about the Gerudo

So I'm gonna leave my review for all chapters so far...

The story is super awesome, I love it. Very well detailed.
Please update! It's just getting good! I am following the story now to keep reading, it's rare for me to follow stories because 90% of writers honestly, suck. But you stood out from that 90%.

P.S. I'm strongly hoping for a Link x Zelda at the end :P

This should be fun to sort out, I wonder how Ganondorf will discover who's telling the truth. Sheik is a bit sadistic and incredibly hotheaded, plus he seems to really hate the royal family. I wonder where it all stems from?

Interesting turn of events.
Let's see how this plays out, shall we?