I loved that one of the best one shots ive read xx

Why is this complete? This story is so good. You should continue!

Wow! I am speechless! Great one-shot!

more, i need more

Very nice. Steamy and niiiiiice

Wow! Why do you keep doing this to meeeee? How can you be so awesome?

First I have to point out the excellent imagery you used here. I could see everything playing out in my mind so clearly. Belle doing her chores, to making her way down to the spring, to the spring itself and to get becoming situated in it. I could also see frantic Rumpelstiltskin running around in my thoughts as he searched for Belle, his coming upon her oh so sly like and her shooting up into the air almost when he surprised her. Also their conversation was absolutely perfect!

"My castle," He replied looking her up and down.

"Naked," Belle shot back.

It had me rolling with laughter I couldn't contain even if I wanted to.

Also Rumple is such a tease! Running his hand almost to where she wants it only to back track it back down. Of course, if he wasn't as such, he wouldn't be our Rumple now would he lol I also like how you had her take control. Plays on the whole "who really is the Master here" concept. Also the implication of them having intimate physical contact spoke volumes in this fic. You really tighten and punched at my heart at the end of this one. (: Oh and part of me is actually glad you mentioned Cora; gave a nice contrast to Belle and the difference she was doing for him.