That was an amazing story! Very well written, and the emotion felt real.
The one and only thing I could think of for any sort of criticism is scene description. (I'm being serious when I say this, I'm not mocking you or poking at you in any way) Once or twice I got lost in a scene and would have to piece together what was happening. As a visual reader(a movie "plays" in my head while I read) it was almost like there was a "jump-cut" in the middle of a scene.

Beleive me, I have had that challenge and have had to rewrite three whole chapters to get one moment to fit in properly. It bugs the crap out of me when I can't fix my own writing. So I understand if a scene just doesn't do your vision justice.

But keep at it! You have talent, and you have skills, now's your chance to improve them and become even better!

You’ll regain it,trust me I lost my groove for the fandom for a year and now I’ve got it groove will come back one day probably when you least expect it

I thank you for your dedication to the story femme. The adventure was a blast, even if Shadowed Dawn isn't complete. I enjoyed it! Wish ya the best with your new interest of Detroit.

I literally chocked on my drink when I saw the notification pop up. Holly craaaap, it's as good as ever. I still love it with my whole heart.

At Sunstreaker's holoform thoughts it should be "She was his to protect", not the other way around, correct?

Very beautiful and emotional. Great use of creativity. Poor Sunny though~ poor spark has suffered through so much for so long. Makes me just want to hug all his troubles away.

Oooh! I loved this one! So many emotions. Lovely

*Cries internally to no end* You, you... Whyyyyyyy you freaking genius? Whyyy? I was in a better mood before I read this! Gahhhhh! Lol :P You made me want to cry... You're good at this game! Whyyyyyyy? Lol

Oooohh my gooood, I'm so excited! It all feels so nostalgic, I just remembered how I used to sit at 4am and read this story, and all of that was about 4 years ago during summer. Time passes by really quickly, huh. I can't even describe how happy I am. Oh boy, that just brings tears to my eyes somehow. And no, believe me, I'm not overreacting. It's just how it is, small things make me happy. And this just made me really, really happy. It made my day. Thank you.

I loved this story so much and really wanna read a sequel! Would be intresting to read about Felicity and Sunstreaker in the actual movies? Meeting all over again while the war is happening?

Please consider this! :D

was I the only one that actually cried? I mean sides just DIED It was so beautifully written but it was SO SAD

*crazy fangirl scream* Oh my pistachio ice cream, I loved this story! This was the best romantic/drama I have ever seen! I don't actually read those kinds of stories, and really only watch romantic/comedies, but this was amazing. I truly enjoyed this.

Romance stories or movies have a tendency to be very fake, and filled with cliche plot lines. Such as 'love at first sight', 'stuck-up meets down-to-Earth', and other such meaningless things. Your writing ability brought out a deeper, realistic, emotional backdrop for the evolution of Sunstreaker and Felicity's relationship.

I don't even know how to describe it, but think you get the picture. Well done, Leonixon.

Cash is out. Peace!

Awesome story. Thank you very much!

Awwww you definitely need that angry reader bunker' now! I love love love this story

*heart eye emoji* Oh man! This looks so cute!