Reviews for Outlet
InLuvWithCandy chapter 3 . 12/25/2014
April 19, wow, that's one day after mine and that's the same as my friend!
P.S. If you're born in April, you are either an Aries or a Taurus. April 19 would be an Aries.
candybrown chapter 15 . 12/1/2014
Congrats of finishing the story. I am sorry I haven't been online due to family affairs and I like the ending. It's different and coolest! Cheerios!
The Unknown Lady chapter 15 . 7/14/2013
HAHAHAHA HE FELL DOWN THE STAIRS! Ha... thats funny! Nice ending! Love it!
The Unknown Lady chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
Great Tom! Your sister almost committed suicide, and you take a picture!? Great brother skills!
The Unknown Lady chapter 13 . 7/14/2013
Wait... pregnant!? Wow, thats a page turner!
The Unknown Lady chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
(*Begins clapping and wipes a tear from eye*) Bravo! Bravo! Magnifique!
The Unknown Lady chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
Oooh! Naughty Alexy! Nice chapter!
The Unknown Lady chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
This is awesome! I love it so much!
PetraWiggin55 chapter 15 . 6/5/2013
cute ending. the armin thing wasnt really resolved though. however it made me so happy her name was faith.
PetraWiggin55 chapter 14 . 6/5/2013
lol Tom is awesome. i love the name lillth (dont think i said that before) i cried a bit during this chapter. but i stll feel like pregnacy was a cop out
PetraWiggin55 chapter 13 . 6/5/2013
it would have taken 2 weeks to know if she was pregnant or not. also nathaniel wouldnt have chosen abortion. and... like the sex scene was cute and funny and all, but with them being that drunk... and nathaniel a virgin... idk... i just dont like the path this took.
howver he reaction to the sex. PERFECT. and im still confused about veronica.
PetraWiggin55 chapter 11 . 6/5/2013
wow... i didnt see that comming. and like... EW! the character of veronica was very well portrayed in such a shor ttime too. good job.
PetraWiggin55 chapter 10 . 6/5/2013
1. i think that you need to get deeper into her depression. how she is thinking because the abuse and the fact that she accepts it isnt enough anymore. we need to see into her deepest thoughts. like... im going to assum you have never suffered from depression as severe as sepi. but i was where she was last year... without the abuse, but basically the same thing. and i think we need to understand her thinking better. she says no one truely cares, but i want more of her thoughts to support that. 2. awwwwwww nathaniel! 3. nose bleeds lol. 4. that scene witht he singing was beautiful 5. i love how this is turnign out. i still think all the guys should fall in love with her. 6. i do think you understand depression. i just still feel like it needs more. idk im missing her deeper emotions.
PetraWiggin55 chapter 8 . 6/5/2013
so i just realized that you already finished it... SADFACE. lol anyways i cant choose between armin and nathaniel D,: the ending of this chapter was cute and very funny. you had a tense issue with the third person though. other than that great job.
PetraWiggin55 chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
so imma list my thoughts again
1. the scene with the boys taking her stuff was confusing. more description needed, make it more obvious that castiel scared them off.
2. few grammar issues when lysbaby first comes into the picture
3. armin scene very cute! but i dont remeber him ever telling her he liked her
4. grammer issues again. your missing words, and it should say in vain on the beach scene. not having the words right makes reading a bit confusing. sorry i keep mentioning it
5. the armin scene at the end. i was spazzing! i know its your story, but if you need and editor, someone to look over the chapters and make sure the flow, or make suggestions for changes before you publish... im here and i would love to help. cuz this is my favorite fanfic EVER. i love the story the concept, even how youve developed the characters. you are amazing and i want to be a part of this
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