This is a good story. All my feels!

Can i just sat WOW! Love your writing, you wrote Emma and Neal so well that
i could actually see your story playing out in my mind as i was reading it.

Wonderfully-written piece of work! Perfectly in-character, incredible detail, and very descriptive. A lot of Swanfire stories I've read have been way too sappy and OOC, but this is just right. Keep writing!

This story is so sweet, I love it :D

Really nice ;)

that was so beautiful. it's great to have to read this after knowing what happens just before neal goes into the portal in "Second star to the right". great job

Ahhhh. This is one of the best swan thief fics I've read. You did a great job characterizing them both and I think the setting was really neat. I could see this all playing out in my head pretty clearly and I could see this happening on the show, even. Lovely job.

Omg!
So.
Many.
Feels.

I love it! They are such a sweet couple, and you write them very well.

My heart is melting.. Thanks a lot!

great story.

This is amazing. Just beautiful and and amazing. I love that they're in Neverland and I love the quick backstory about Neal and Hook and I actually loved because I said for weeks I believe he was a pirate instead of a Lost Boy.

Emma's excitement over Tinkerbell was so cute.

And of course the romance was wonderful. I loved the fairies and the dancing and of course the kissing.

You did such a great job here.

Wow, just wow! Thank you for this, it's wonderful!

Lovely! Thank you!