Reviews for And They All Die in the End
EmiCyanSayMii chapter 11 . 3/2/2014
Aww man I'm really sad that this has discontinued. But I'm glad to hear that you're alive at least I was starting to get worried!
I must say, this story was one of the best stories out there in my opinion. It really made my summer and I hoped that my reviews made your day shine! I really loved this story and even though fate has won I will still continue to love it. Hey I might make something dedicated to this, if you don't mind c;
And after all this time, I still don't know who fate was haha I'm such a loser ;w;
I wish you a big farewell from the fandom! Keep staying awesome and beautiful!
-3B
booksnob chapter 11 . 2/26/2014
Who is the killer? I have my suspicions but I'd like to know if I'm right.
Marshal Thompson chapter 11 . 2/26/2014
One does not simply "leave" the hetalia fandom
Purestrongpoem chapter 11 . 2/26/2014
Oh, that is too sad. Well, good luck on your other things.
Glitchpng chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
I love your writing style! The bit with France at the end made me cry, I love this whole story. Keep it up!
RinzlerKitty94 chapter 10 . 10/10/2013
Shizuki, you need to continue writing. But then again, I don't want Vali to die... DX
Dante chapter 10 . 9/27/2013
well, well, well... I cried when Canada, France and Russia died...
ermn, the story was awesome.. i like the last part so much... they died twogether... Lars didn,t have to die alone ans that made me feel better...
..I wish i could find out who,s Fate though..
EmiCyanSayMii chapter 9 . 9/8/2013
Late reply uwah D;

Buut omg...the heartbreaking news in this chapter ;A;
And now my view of who the killer is is not clear :T -slaps self- come on Emi think ;-;
Aurora Chen chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
My bet is on Greece, I think he's pretty suspicious, or maybe turkey
Aurora Chen chapter 10 . 9/4/2013
Dearest Xiangli,
May I ask you, where did New Zealand, Cyprus, Cameroon, Egypt, India and Macau go? Also, I didn't quite catch who was taking care of France's land because if someone was taking care of that land, wouldn't Monaco still be alive? And if Japan was taking care of Australia, wouldn't Wy be alive?

Next, since Romano is taking whole care of Netherlands and Belgium, what happens to Luxembourg? Or does he even exist in this story? I was thinking that he/she was also one of the siblings right? I think there could have definitely be more explanation.

The last thing I have to ask is, if there would be someone to replace England's place as the personification of the United Kingdom of Great Britain, wouldn't it be the previous personification's closest sibling? In this case, I would have thought that Sealand would have taken his place as the personification of the UK, even though he's really young.
Canadatheninja chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
I bet it's Italy . I got my eyes on you Italy
Italy : V-Veh!?
Purestrongpoem chapter 9 . 8/31/2013
Great chapter.
deadbirdflying chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
Yay! It won't end soon! *dances*
AND an alphabetical list of current survivors. ;; I love you so much. It's alphabetical! *dances again*
I'd rather it be alphabetical instead of giving a clue.
deadbirdflying chapter 9 . 8/31/2013
ASDFGHJKL. Prussia said 'sorry'. *faints dramatically*
IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!
Cold-breaths chapter 9 . 8/31/2013
Hello, Arthur here.
Hmm.
Err.
Um.
Okay, so I didn't have much time to collect my thoughts on everything since I have to go to bed pretty soon. Nevertheless, I am getting tired. But bare with me.
Because of school, I've been worrying a lot lately, and I can not deal with stress right now. So as you can guess, my thoughts are currently swirling aimlessly around in a hurricane.
Anyway, its the weekend, I can be free, if only for a couple of days.
The only thing I can be certain about is that Fate is not a country. ( I could still be wrong ... Probably.)
For now, at least, I want to stick to one theory.
But putting aside Fate, I like how you wrote Bella and Abel's death. It was really bitter that it almost reached sweet to me. A melancholy sweet at that. Normally, I can't stand sweet to the connect of it turning cliche. Though, this was just a nice, peaceful ending for them. The skeletons weren't a surprise to me, though that doesn't mean I necessarily saw it coming. I'm not one to be big with science, but putting that aside, I saw it has a memorial placing for them, as small as it was. How the game played out between the four of them wasn't dragged out, but just short enough to be described. I also would like to note about the length of each chapter. It seems decent, taking into place of the content. It also gives me enough to get me going on ideas of what will happen next, but not quit enough for me to draw the whole picture.
One of the reasons why I like mysteries is because I won't be able to grasp the whole concept until I read more. Plus, being as meticulous as I am, I will take the little things into concentration, but not that much that I will make huge possibilities out of them. I could either be very paranoid for finding clues and answers, or I may just be too abscessed with this than my other stories because of the simply fact I have Writer's Block. ( Which really didn't need to be mentioned, since I have no confidence whatsoever. )
Gah! No! I am not getting off topic (again)!
...
What was I going to say ...
Oh!
I'm glad Austria finally showed up. (Kinda late to the party, are we now?)
Well, that's one theory crossed out. (Probably for the better too. )
Anyway, wow. This story is very intriguing. Thoughts of this story have randomly popped up to me in the shower as well. ( Once again, I probably need more sleep. And less stress on my shoulders.)
Well then, I think this is a good note to leave off with. Good luck with the next chapters!
:D Now then, I shall sleep!
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