| Reviews for Henry's World |
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Sparkleyangel chapter 3 . 8/19/2013 I love it :D that must've been a terrible dream , poor Henry :( |
tvaloha chapter 3 . 8/9/2013 Please write more one-shots! :) Love Chuck, Blair, Henry |
SnowedUnderNJ chapter 3 . 8/7/2013 Aww! Thanks again for recommending my fics. I so appreciate it. I liked this chapter it was sweet & I, of course, can see Blair & Chuck having a hard time saying no to their little boy. He'll be spoiled no doubt. Keep up the great work! |
maddycullen chapter 3 . 8/7/2013 Ww so cute :) |
Sparkleyangel chapter 2 . 8/5/2013 I loved it :D |
elizabeth.mary.stark chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 Funny - you need to break it up though, not like one long paragraph, it is hard to read. Hope this helps! |
VFBFan chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 I love stories that revolve around Henry Bass because there was too little of Henry in the series final, plus I was very disappointed that we didn't get to see Blair interact with her son on the show. I have to say that I've never liked stories where daughters are pictured as the perfect girls, who are the smartest, the kindest, the best...it seems like she can do no wrong, while Henry is pictured as the jealous brat. And I agree with another reviewer...she doesn't really talk like a three year old,but I don't really mind that BUT...I was able to speak at the age of two as well...well that's what my parents told me, but I'm not "smarter than others" because of that. It has nothing to do with being smart or not. Some kids learn certain things quicker than others. That's normal but in my pov nothing special. You'll see how "smart" someone is when they get older and wiser. I don't like the "Little sister is all perfect and smart" stuff at all. Sorry. I actually wanted to read sweet stuff about Henry since this story is about him, but I really didn't like the first chapter. Wouldn't suprise me if his younger sister turned out to be class valerdictorian in High School since she is sooo smart. I don't like perfect persons. I like persons with flaws. And "picture perfect girls"...seems like they can do no wrong. That's kinda boring. :p Would be cool if Henry wasn't that stupid, annoying brat in the near future. Good try. I'm gonna wait for your second chapter though. ;) |
Feedback4u chapter 1 . 4/30/2013 It's a good try! But you should have paragraph breaks.. There are some spelling errors- nothing that a spell check won't cure. I found Henry to be a pansy- sorry but he just do much for me. Cordelia seems to have the right attitude but she doesn't seem three.. Maybe 9 or 10 |
SnowedUnderNJ chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 I stumbled on this & was flattered that you chose to use my choice of Cordelia for Chuck & Blair's daughter. Also want to thank you for the kind words about my work. I appreciate it. As a first try this was good. I loved Henry's tirade about the baby. So funny. Cordelia is a regular little bossy pants. Like mother, like daughter. Great first effort! Keep it up. S |
feedback chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 well, since you asked what you could fix: paragraph breaks please! also, you meant cordelia has chuck wrapped around her finger. raped is a very different word. |
mahnaz chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 awww this was really cute. i would love to c u continue |
Sparkleyangel chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 I like it :) |