hmm i think hibari would not say ohayo he would probably just end up going Hn and nod remember he is a man of few words and even if he does love tsuna he is socially awkward and does not like to act herbivorous. other then that i really liked it i cant wait until the next chapter.

another chapter please

I... Think I'm melting... From... Cuteness...

Now there is this HUGE misunderstanding...Good luck Hibari!

Oh my goodness! I love this story so much even though it's not finished! Keep on writing because you have amazing talent! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ganbatte!

This is so cute! When i reached the latest chapter I got sad that there wasn't more XC but I get I'll have to wait C: Keep up the good work!

Hehehe...These are just my fantasies so I apologize if its too OOC...
Gokudera will be in the next chapter so..lets just see if he has really broken up with Yamamoto...

Wait, wait wait, WAIT!

Gokudera-kun broke up with Yamamoot? HAH?!

And... Hibari-sama stutters? The hell! Is that even possible? Still acting like a High school girl in love... Demo.. I kinda like this chapter.. Oh and the Ohayo part of Hibari got repeated, though the other got a little extension

Pang! The power of guilt! Dont ever underestimate it!
It even made the all mighty hibari sama feel guilty!((gets bitten to death by hibari
*runs to tsuna and uses him as a shield*
Hah!nice try!((hibari glares
Yikes! I'm getting bitten to death when tsuna's gone!
Kusakabe is really ooc! And guess what? I love it!
yamamoto did'it'with baka-dera?!
well that was to expect ,poor dera chan...
Had a mc for ass pain?((gets bombed by haya chan
nice chapter
Hope u upload more interesting chapters

As long as the OC doesn't get a major role then I'm fine with it.

I love Kusakabe.

Thanks for pointing all those things out. Hehehe. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you guy like the story so far. I guess it was my plan to portray Hibari's character that way because I wanted him to change as the story progressed. In the outside I wanted him to she a lot meaner than he was in the anime and manga, but in the inside I wanted him to be soft and actually very emotional. Hehehe. I also find it cute Hibari being this way.

Hibird. Will be in the next chapter... Hehe.
I'll update soon! Thanks again guys!

I can't wait for the next chapter! *Fangirl Scream* It's a really great story so far. Keep on doing well!

The summary caught my attention, but, in my opinion, it would had been better if you kept the POV consistent. With Hibari's thoughts clashing with Tsuna's, it makes it rather confusing to read it.

For the first chapter: 'Talking to others, pretending to like them when the truth is I actually don't is a pain in the ass.' There's nothing between don't and is.

It's Hibird, not Hybrid.

It's Juudaime, not Judaiime.

Hibari was obviously very out-of-character. The way you depicted him made it seem like he was a robot void of emotions, only created to kill. He would never call Hibird annoying as he seemed to honestly care about the bird in canon, call Yamamoto an idiot (Remember, he acknowledged the baseball player during the Choice Arc, but it depends on the timeline you're using, I guess?), nor would he just beat Kusakabe like that, no matter how conflicted he felt regarding his emotions. But I was amused at the thought of Kusakabe having a girlfriend and the fact that he became a love advisor. I had to laugh at that.

In the second chapter, 'ohayo' means good morning. 'Baka' only has a single k. But, frankly, it would be better to stop using Japanese terms and keep the story consistent in English. Just an opinion, though. You should also omit Tsuna's thoughts in Hibari's POV. I mean, it is Hibari's. It would be pointless to add Tsuna's in it, adding the fact that he has his own view. But hey! I loved Hibari's imagination. The thought of Hibari being like that was kind of humorous.

You also kept switching from past tense to present tense and vice versa. I also have that problem, and it's kind of hard to get cured from it. Pfft. Overall, I'm intrigued at how this would develop. Hope to see you soon! :)

Weeeeww.. Good chapter!

Ohayo? Gokudera-kun said Ohayu after school? Why?

Hibari-sama is acting like a freaking high school girl _

Demo! That's what's making him cute :)