Reviews for What If |
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![]() ![]() omg shes pregnant |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story :) please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work :) -RB |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter :D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YAY annie pregnant! Now i wonder biar and annie and finnick son are date? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nnnnnooooo Finnick die :( I love finnick, why you kill finnick off? *Run to a corner and cry for hours* |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is akcanine. :) I liked this chapter, although it was filled with typos and misspellings that made it difficult to enjoy. When I'm reading your story and there's a typo, it really pulls me out if the story and it takes a whole for me to get back into the character's world again. Aside from that, this was great. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally Coin is going to have them rescue Katniss. I love that Peeta is the one to tell Katniss mom and Prim the wonderful news. Galw POV was awesome to see that Gale was able to understand what Katniss was talking about the capital. Then realize that as long as Katniss is happy with Peeta he is happy for her. It so sweet how he see so much of Katniss in Blair. It had to be horrifying to see Katniss in the state of mind she in plus the way she looks full of Cinna blood all over her. She also terrified that they are there to hurt or kill her, so sad and heart breaking. Katniss telling Gale for them not to hurt her any more and why she started to cut herself that it help her deal with the pain and it felt good. Now Gale knows she has been tortured. Onto chapter 13 to how Katniss response to Peeta and Blair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor katniss and peeta they have go and leave Briar :( |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT! |
![]() ![]() Tell your English teacher I'm obsessed! You made me cry and yell and scream and- I just- I can't even- this is just so amazingly good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was truly awesome. I really liked the overall writing in this chapter - it was very powerful. :) Also, it's wonderful that you're updating this so regularly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love briar and peeta is right she did get her stubborn from katniss :) |