| Reviews for The Marriage Deal |
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   Lattelady chapter 2 . 11/21/2014 Nice little beginning. Hopefully you can be convinced to get back to it. I like your edgy Gold and your strong Belle. |
| priestessofeternity chapter 2 . 9/12/2013 Fantastic story! More please! |
| All Hallows' Eve31 chapter 2 . 7/18/2013 I love that you finally updated. I like how you had Belle stick to her guns and fight for her job I enjoyed that because some stories they have Belle allowing Mr. Gold to walk over her and not fight him because they (the writers) have her see that "he is not a monster he just need somebody to love him after years on being lonely" but many can not write Belle being a strong , brave girl like she is in the show, instead they write her being a love struck teenager ignoring his abuse and darkness as if it is just a minor flaw and I really like how you actually have a strong Belle and I hope you keep that up. As a side comment, I LOVE that you made Mr. Gold's first name Adam, like in the actually "Beauty and the Beast" move. Now they and really are "Beauty and the Beast". Please update soon. |
| WallyBurton chapter 2 . 7/15/2013 Please update soon? Can't wait for more! Such a good concept. |
| NicoleMuenchSeidel chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Good ol' Moe, ready to pimp out his daughter in a heartbeat...and of course Gaston has to act like she does nothing at work. Gold is in for a big surprise with Belle. Great sexual tension between Gold and Belle. I just read both chapters and look forward to more. |
| Booth Seeley Booth chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 So happy to see a new chapter and longer one at that. Can't wait to see how this is going to play out now. |
| The Auburn Girl chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Fuck you, Mr. Gold. That was coooolllddddd. But I love this so much :D Please continue! Seriously, I laughed sooo hard at "Belle watched in amazement as she watched her male chief of human resources duck into the women's bathroom". My parents even asked what was wrong :3 |
| The Auburn Girl chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *fangirl attack* My friend DruidKitty told me to read this and just just ! AHHHHHHHHHH This is PERFECTION |
| DruidKitty chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Omg please continue! |
| DruidKitty chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 Great first chapter, I'm curious to see where u will take it! |
| juju0268 chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 loved it! can't wait for more. please dont make it a month or something crazy!lol |
| Rayvah chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 So glad you updated! Excellent! I wonder if they'll end up liking each other? ;-) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Please keep up this story. I'm looking forward to how it develops. |
| AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 I'm loving this story so far! I hope there'll be a third chapter soon :) |
| CocoRocks chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 This is a interesting story so far. Keep up the good work. |
