I would love to read a rewrite! I really enjoyed this story when I first read it, and it has inspired a fanfic that I have been planning on writing. I think it would be spectacular to read a rewrite and see what your imagination and experience give to us!

Have you ever heard of this time travel saying? "Change anything, change everything."

He's quite the dramatic storyteller. "I plunged into the icy depths below." *raises eyebrow*

I’d be interested.

I would be definitely be interesting to see your growth as a writer from then to now. I support it fully

-Formerly SpecialGirlz, now reveaquarius, to lazy to long in again

HE'S GONE TO VISIT NORTH!?

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

Oh No!
Where's Jack!?
Where's Emma!?
What's Pitch planning!?
Is Sophie in danger!?
So many questions!
Not enough answers!

Poor Emma!
The idea of another sibling must be tearing her up with guilt!

They're in trouble!

This chapter made me cry!
I love it and can't wait to read the rest!

OOOH a rewrite would be awesome! I understand how it's like to look back at your work lmao. I may be 15, but looking back at my horrible 4th grade stories, I screamed. I've noticed a rushed plot in this fic, but yeah you could make it so amazing with more details!

Gosh, is everyone on here older than me and in university?

I loved this story. If you want to write it again, I'll definitely read it. Could we get that sequel perhaps as well? Congrats on your college too.

DOCTOR WHO!

That's sad.(T-T)