I think we can safely say that this has been dumped.
You oughta hang your head in shame for wasting everyones time. Including your own.

Five chapters in a year? Your heart really isn't in this, is it?

Why did he take notice of her... stalking her... that's the question

Really like this so far, am interested to know where it goes

just start reading this story.
very interesting :)

Thank you for the update!

I had to go back and re read the previous chapters; to tell you the truth I could not remember what the story was about.

Thanks for the update! They are right, if you update often you will get more reviews. I know RL is busy.

Review boost

Ooh! Three chapters in six months! You must be so proud!

This story should have far more reviews and follows.
Unfortunately erratic updates will stop readers investing their time in it. We have been let down so many times by writers who allow gaps between chapters to get longer and longer, only to get dumped, that we are now fighting shy of committing to any new story.
Unless you update regularly, at least fortnightly, your story will not get the attention it deserves. If you knew you would be too busy to give this the attention it deserves, then you shouldn't have started it.
Sad, but true.

I saw this story in another reader's favorite and decided to check it out. So far so good.

more plz.

Did Bella have an accident or something after the prologue? Her attraction toward Edward is way too strong for someone she just met by chance.

Is Jake telling the truth? Did he dump someone Edward cares about or perhaps slept with his girlfriend? Maybe he is not even aware.

Does Edward believe Bella is Jake's girl and he is going to take his revenge using her, making her look like a fool,...