I loved this chapter! Well done! I'm anxious to see what will be in the Daily Prophet that will be so important. I have a strong feeling that Nathan was the one who visited Voldemort with Bellatrix. I hope I'm wrong. Anyways, great chapter, and I anxiously await the next!

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more.

Before I start reading this story I wanted to see if you decided to make it a Harry/Hermione ship. I only read Harry/Hermione ship stories. Thanks.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story .

Really great chapter! I really like Nathan. I assume he is your OC. I knew his adoptive father would be Voldemort or Dumbledore. Dumbledore because of when he said, "If you fear some ones name, you will fear the real thing even more." And Voldemort because of the eyes. I have to say I'm really curious about his eyes. Love Hermione's comeback to Malfoy as well! I anxiously await the next chapter!

excent update

Poor Hermione. I have to say I'm quite interested in that spell... Did you make it up, or is it an actual spell from Harry Potter? Anyways, that was a really great chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to read future chapters you may post! I'm curious to know what Dumbledore will say!

This is something I've never seen before, Harry is constantly threatened and pursued by Voldemort bent on killing him, this is a given. You now have Hermione with her own personal threat to her life, bellatrix has sworn a vendetta against her and is now hell bent on torturing and murdering her over everything else...never scene a deatheater take a special interest in one of the trio before, nice idea. Harry and her now both have individual lunatics out for their blood, that's a really crappy boat to be in, but altleast theyre in it together..

Thanks for sharing, as always I eagerly await your next update.

Well I got a pleasant shock at realizing this story already had a second chapter! This chapter is just as wonderful as the previous! I simply can't wait for the next chapter! Loved Fred and George's appearance (they're my favorite hp characters). Very interesting so far, can't wait to see what happens next! I also can't wait to find out why Hermione was targeted! Anyways, Happy Writing!

Really great start, I think it holds a lot of potential. I eagerly await your next chapter. About the pairings, I think it would be great to see a Hermione/Harry shipping. I've just always thought they'd make a great couple. But it's your story, so you can do whatever you want and be as creative as you want! Also, I'd like to thank you for following my story Dying Hopes. You're the first one to follow and favorite and I'm really grateful. In fact, if you hadn't of done that I may not have found this amazing story! Again, I really can't wait to see where this story goes!

cool chapter

nice start

good story story so far I hope harry and hermione are together

This story shows great promise, I wonder if Ron is the third person of the real prophecy or of its perhaps another maybe Neville? I am certainly interested to find out. In regard to pairings I think it should be Harry/Hermione, they already seem to have a great friendship, it will certainly translate into a beautiful relationship.

all in all this certainly shows promise, thank you for sharing, I eagerly await your next.