You did a great job with this scene from both POV's. It is easy to think that this is exactly what they were thinking.

Beautifully written! I wish you would write more lovelies about these two, one of my favorite couples of all-time. You are a wonderful writer!

Cesare's " words " to Lucrezia are so intense, memory of their night together in his mind , his pain , the connection . It's terrific. Please write more.

Intense, powerful , painful , just like the scene from a tragic , unique one. I love that we can have Lucrezia 's feelings. Very well written.

Excellent :) I love the way you write his thoughts!

LOVED IT! I can totally imagine Cesare thinking that!