nice

WTF!

Roy is soooo OOOOOOOOOOOOOOCCCCCC! Like okay Envy shut up! (Poor Ed! Roy that was a dick thing to say, but poor Roy was having a gloomy day so let's throw in the unnecessary drama and make Ed feel lower then dirt...) get it? Lower? Cause he's so short? *chuckles to self*

Nice story but mot the best ending actually.

THIS IS GOLD! I KNOW THIS IS LATE BUT THIS IS SO GOOD!

I LOVE mosh pits! Gives me an excuse to push my little bro around! ;) But he always volunteers to go in the middle, of it wouldn't be as fun.

That extra just killed me with laughter. Especially right I was tearing up from the story.

Yes, little one, I absolutely love you to no end. And your fanfics are fantabulous *yes, that's a real word*.

I really like this s far from what I've read. You are doing a very good job.

-JazmineElric

Roy! I never ever thought I would call you of all people a bastard!

awe so cute

Loved it! Oh ma gawd had to bite my lip not to laugh the whole time kept thinking of MY 'to burn list' LOL XD!-insani out! Dammit my split personality wrought that and wont let me erase it! But I have to agree about MY 'to burn list' LOL XD -Hammer out!( Hammer shortier version of Fun hammer)

OMG we need a new Truth
HE LIED
HOW CAN THE TRUTH LIE
1) He lied to Ed about Roy's intentions
2) He told Roy he would never be forgiven

No! Roy! Look farther than Risembool! Also, I think it's some sort of poetic justice that that guy saw the dream... With Roy in it. Oh, little boy, you should know that the man who said that is COLONEL ROY MUSTANG, FLAME ALCHEMIST. THERE IS NO ESCAPE.
Nice extra scene! I hope everyone else gets it, too, because no matter how far away they run, Roy will find them. And carry out his promise.

Whoop! What's he gonna do?