There is a couple of grammar mistakes and also how is a single fighter able to so that especially to covenant ships (I think) which I'm pretty sure has better shields than a unsc ship? I mean I know it is foreunner but a dots could probably take a foreunner knight down a couple of times out of ten. Otherwise the story is pretty good.

im pretty sure guns in mass effect dont use bullets unless me3 is different then me1 i could be wrong but everything else is promising! please tell me uf im wrong. good beggining

Uhhhh, I'm confused beyond believe right not, but sadly I understand all of what is said, I know how some of that stuff work's

You should of add shadow the hedeghog but hey it your story so can anything in it good story to by the way

Great job with this story, love how you cross the different dimensions together. Good job keep it up

Fucking AWESOME! I just loved the action, fights and tension here, you out did your self here and should be proud of your self. I can't wait to see what you add and do in the next one.

First off, I loved the concept for your story, but it seriously needs to be edited. There are a LOT of misspellings and poorly chosen words. The auto-correct seems to have gone haywire and has misplaced a lot of words that have forced me to stop reading, as I no longer have any idea what is going on.

Damn that was soo cool i wa slike yeah chief shep Kick ass boys and girls... hey its Mikasa...right those guys were also here...urgh..NEVERMIND STILL AWESOME ...but seriously ..akame ga Kiru?¡..Emperor's Mercy thanks to chief i will endure anything ...but you killed Garrus...you killed garrus...ok ok i dont gonna lie...im so eager for the part 2..lets see who are the pairings

Shame this story was a crossover between the most stupidest universes imaginable. Should have been Star Wars, Star Trek, Warhammer, ME and Halo not this Avatar and other BS

First of, GARRUS NNNOOOOOOOO! Yes I'm a fan of him and I was hoping he would go all the way to the end of the trilogy here, but this is your fanfic and it was well done man. I loved the action here as always and what a twist with Vatuu and Elsa's ice powers. You never dissapionted man with the epicness, twists and surprises. Keep up the great work and I look forward to see more and how this will effect the cast here and what/who will come next.

okok im again a 40k Kinda guy and there is AN Terrible Measure of Tragedy there uuuf But you just cant go around Killing Garrus ¡ i mean he the real GOOD Stuff Mass effect has aported to SPACEE

This continues to be a great story with far more plot twists than I was expecting. GARRUS! When you said that you were unsure of Garrus' fate though, I was almost positive you were going to kill him anyway lol. Anyways good chapter, can't wait to see more! Also I have an idea I will PM you about if you don't mind hearing :P

Oh, your ass is SOOO dead Black Knight...

You making me feel for these characters... Nice chapter.

Hey if you still need people to Beta for you let me know. Your stories, while good, have a lot of errors in them still. Moister/Moisture, barley/barely, scrapped/scraped, etc. Most just improper word usage.