Reviews for Quinary
dnil chapter 5 . 4/19/2017
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this, but it is very, very well written. Love how you used the senses to write the one shots.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/4/2016
I sincerely enjoyed this- the premise is unique and fresh and your writing was tight and well thought-out. I am late to the game as I see this piece was written a few years ago, but I hope you have written more. Off to look!
BlueSaffire chapter 5 . 9/6/2016
Wow! Breathtaking! Love Alice's POV. Great insight into her psyche! What a terrific idea to uses the 5 senses as a theme for these short fics. Thank you!
BlueSaffire chapter 4 . 9/5/2016
Yes! They survived the cliffs and loved together! Love Uncas's patience as he helps Alice face her fears. Lovely!
BlueSaffire chapter 3 . 9/5/2016
So well written! Thank you!
BlueSaffire chapter 2 . 9/5/2016
"As night crawls it's way into the pale silence before dawn, Alice watches his stomach rise and fall." Your imagery is amazing (fitting for this chapter!). You are a wonderful writer and your gift really shows through here. Thank you!
BlueSaffire chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Uncas plays the piano! Somehow, I think it works! I also like how he is annoyed initially by Alice's behavior in the graveyard, but then sees her own self loathing. He notices everything!
echotheinferno chapter 5 . 6/4/2014
Great.. Story? One-shots? Chapter things? Whatever you call it, it was great:)
Namidaga Ochiru chapter 5 . 5/19/2014
Hmmm... interesting, but almost no AliceUncas. :/
Namidaga Ochiru chapter 4 . 5/19/2014
Ooh, Uncas is teaching Alice how to face her fears! :D
Guest chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
muito legal seu fanfiction
CelticGirl7 chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
So for this one is goes all the way to the beginning. I would of loved to smell those flowers. :3
And thus begins the changing of Alice Monroe, from proper English woman to a survivor of the terrors of war on the Frontier. I like how you put on her thoughts on first meeting Uncas, since it really does show the setting off of the soon to come events afterwards. Be strong Miss Alice. Be strong.
GOTTA GO! PEACE!
CelticGirl7 chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
Aww, the happy married couple. :)
Now that I think about it, Alice would freak out at least a bit if she was introduced to the serpents of the Frontier. And I could see Uncas guiding her to conquer some of her fears. Cue another D'AAWWW moment. We don't get enough cute moments like this. :3
While I'm not the biggest fan of snakes, I have to admit there's just something cute about their beady black eyes. Aaaand shutting up now.
GOTTA GO! PEACE!
CelticGirl7 chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
I admire Alice's conviction here. I certainly wouldn't of drank the whole thing, and would of awkwardly let it stay a couple inches away from my platter.
Another night, Uncas, -narrows eyes- but it better be the next one.
GOTTA GO! PEACE!
CelticGirl7 chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
Ah, so an allusion of what could have happened in the AU route (Ironic that the first letter in Uncas and Alice's names could make that initial.)
Wonder if Alice really did go to help Mr. Phelps back at the fort, seeing that she wouldn't of wanted to see the blood. Hmm...
GOTTA GO! PEACE!
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